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where ancient times were forgotten, a child will have the opportunity to bring that strength to the present, thanks to his Master Sinbad
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Hrmmm, fairytail fanfic, but most of the story has taken place in the naruto world??? Also why is mc such a pushover? And dense? Its unreal how stupidly dense he is. As a king why does he let the girls walk all over him?? I understand the generic girl beats up guy trope, but this yandere stuff makes him look like such a beta Male. Especially when people talk down about his talent.
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Author why did you drop marvel emperor I really like that one,if you are going to 100% drop can you tell me it’s still in my library. ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ........
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Well,you wanna review,you get it.Incredible good concept and idea.Like for real. Writing-even if i can understand,he/she dispelled so many times,that it's become wierd. Characters-Woah,this sh*t hit the fan.You create problem for mc,on all line.Like you hate him.Yandere is fun,but maybe,you can stop bulling mc a bit.He is like a b*tch for all woman,even got r*ped,yeah very funny. And of course,our brave hero,who always suffer,like a immovable rock,that never learn and only whine,yeah thanks again. It's really hard to read,and yeah no character development,I don't even know,if it would be. Conclusion-Good story,good idea,don't wanna to read,because it's really hard to understand how this degenerate of beta mc,struglle like b*tch from all woman. I feel like it's just a satire,but with a great concept.So actually,it's better will be without harem or woman in general.Even though,I actually like harem story.