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A man who transmigrated into the world of Danmachi with a System.
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i will not talked about the story. every story of this author is really good ngl. but the author itself is really inconstant with the updating stability or would just dropped the story without any notice
I don't normally do reviews this early but I want to because it seems like the previous reviews are kinda harsh and biased. the story so far is above average for a danmachi fanfic, certainly better than a majority of trash fics out there. As for the stability of updates I can't say, I hope the author doesn't drop the story for no good reason. All in all, it is worth a read.
I do love me a good danmachi fanfic, I like the system concept but the MC’s whole mysterious backstory is a little too forced and cringy at times for me.
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Uh the writing is ok and the idea is pretty good. The system works with falna and it doesnt make any loop holes. The system actually isn’t as Op as it could be which was good. I am dropping it though simply because of the sudden change in wording. I know the author was just messing around with a new writing style but it just doesn’t work if you change how a character talks/thinks during chapter like 5. It took me completely out of the story. He suddenly became british which makes sense if you were emulating Tolkein. However, you had him speak like a modern American and now he is suddenly speaking like a ye old Londoner and a sense of grace that doesn’t fit the character you had already detailed. I can no longer extrapolate his thinking because you just made a new character.
Pretty standard system fic. I will say that I absolutely hate his choice of weapon he buys early on. Hard to use effectively, dangerous to himself and any allies, and honestly might be the reason I drop this in the future if he keeps using it.
Nothing really interesting here, same old join hestia and a standard system. Seem to be a a couple steps down compared to their dxd fanfic.