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An average otaku died and got reincarnated into the world of Danmachi with a system.
How is she going to survive with a newly developed system?
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5 stars because I'm generous. ==============================================================================================================
Reviewing a year after it gotndropped because it still comes up in my mind sometimes. Tons of potential and it was delivering it hand over fist in just a few short chapters. I wish it would get picked back up or a similar one would be made.
Basically the whole story gets dropped before there is enough to give a proper review therefore it is not worth anymore than 2.5🌟 ..... ... ..............
so far so good. stable updates. keep up the good work.....................................................................................................................................................
Quick review. System pretty bare at the start and MC could use a bit more fleshing out. Good start, the fact that she is Freyas demigod is a bit OP but most SI are.... Overall just work on building the MCs background/character as you go on, try not to give her too many freebie skills and have her earn more the hard way (dungeon crawling). Good luck!
Nth special. Just a generic fanfic of danmachi with another system u can find in so many other fan fics here. Chapters are too short as well and there are so few chapters in. Dosent even seem interesting from the start. Grammer errors here and there and paragraphing needs work
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shameless review coming........................ . ................................................................................................................................................
Can I know who is the girl in the cover page =================================================================================================================================
5 star from me to ==============================================================================================================================
Liked the story, author said they were redoing it. Based on the fact that most authors would never follow up from my experience, that remains to be seen. Still it was good and I hope the rewrite will be better.