/ Anime & Comics / In a Cultivation world with a world conquering system
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reborn in a cultivation world, the MC find himself talented and good for nothing. lucky for him, he finds that he was reborn with a unique golden finger
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Meaning and grammar are uncomfortable to read. Mc power leveling is total mess at ch 1 you said copper 5 then at ch 3 it become copper 3. Author power levling writing is pure trash. What i don't understand is mc is just a copper rank. meliodas power level is 34000 in unseal form which mean in your cultivation rank rank 9 silver rank right
The writing quality is bad. In most sentences there are some random words that make absolutely no sense being there.
the whole thing is a mess. It feels like that the writer himself is not clear about his own Power system /cultivation system. The sentences don't make sense at all.
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The concept can be called original. The novel can be called good. It would be good for the author to improve himself over time by writing. It would be nice to be more descriptive in some places. mc needs to show his true self, he is someone who does everything for power, but in some places he is ridiculous, mc needs to be someone who does everything for his interests. in some places he contradicts himself.
Love the whole novel, all the chapters are large and the concept and development is great, basically the mc had a system that allow him to go outside his own universe(the cultivation universe) and conquer other worlds, people and fuse everything that its there to keep expanding and evolving their world, while he do this he keeps following the plot that is good because there is always more in store to motivate mc to cultivate. But what i like the most is the cultivation system, the cultivation system and the things cultivators can do in sora's world is really crazy and is even stronger than other cultivation novels, but even like that is not boring to read the novel, the powerscale is really well balanced and all the diferent enemies's powers levels in other worlds are measured using the same cultivation system so its not confusing. really you shoud give it a try, there is always something new to make the novel more and more interesting.
t would have been a masterpiece if you add red in the harem wuahahahahshahahah I mean it would be the most logical reason, it just need a bit more emotion
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Writing quality needs a total overhaul as there are tons of mistakes (i.e. grammar, spelling, meaning etc.) I highly advise author to read English dictionary to broaden your vocabulary. the path on how the story goes is a bit confusing as there are tons of inconsistencies to the story development itself. MC is a bit idiotic as a reincarnated individual with a knowledge from earth 'otaku' he can't seem to plan ahead. Updates are good as well as the world background except the power scaling. Kudos and I hope this review will help you further in your path author-san.
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