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Chapters are all over the place, spelling mistakes are common, progression is WAY too fast, I think you're trying too hard to get 1 chapter out everyday. Take it slow and try to write in more detail and re-read your work afterwards.
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Chapters are all over the place, spelling mistakes are common, progression is WAY too fast, I think you're trying too hard to get 1 chapter out everyday. Take it slow and try to write in more detail and re-read your work afterwards.