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Im Only Going To Stop When I Break The Absolute limit !!!!! there is no limit known smirk
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if your going to read this you have to listen the the music i put in the botom of the page so copy and past it in the top of the browser k lol its for background sound but the voice of them can set certain moods so thats why its not only the beat but real songs
{I'm not the best with commas and similar stuff I'm going to collage to fix it soon.
So give me some slack if you can get past that you will probebly really like this}
{I will say when you guys can start the suggestions just not at the start}
[also haters beware I will ignore you so don't get but hurt just if you don't like it don't read it don't even comment]
somewhere in an alleyway a "normal" and slightly insane young high school student died a sad and tragic death by offending some drug addicts in this maddening concrete jungle and ended up having a bullet in his head.
But that is not the end.
Soon he found himself waking up to learn that he has merged with a mysterious entity that was on the verge of death, by saving it through the merging process, it granted him a new life- but at a cost.
He will be sent to another world where swords and magic exist, this is where his journey will begin, he will have to fight his way to the peak of that new world!
[A/N - System Novel that gives the user access to perks that's otherwise impossible to happen.]
you dont get any spoilers lol but i will say no ntr or werd stuff like futas except 1 slime girl . XD
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Honestly, I like the plot around it but not the way it was typed up. It looks like you were in a huge rush and you didn't bother to go back and fix the mistakes you made. I hope you revise your first chapter and try to fix the many errors in it. This definitely has potential if you fix the errors!
He made this novel not have a harem and had no tags warning he got my hopes up Not putting up tags are bad it’s common decency yet no one uses fickingn tags From now on if I find a good novel and it’s not a harem and has no tags ima give 1 Star. If it has a harem I’ll look away but still be fed up Put tagggsss on your Fucking novel if you are putting it up if there is a harem make a harem tag if it is non harem put a non harem tag It takes 5 seconds of a author is not shure at fist it’s cool as long as when he makes up his mind he puts a tag up. 5 fucking second I don’t like bieng harem blocked it’s just as bad as getting cock blocked It hurts as much as when you get to the third chap and gender bender happend it’s not cool and it feels tarrable Yes I’m fucking mad I was hyped at the first chap How else shuld one feel if one is trying to find some novels and no one puts a indicator that the tag you like is there or more importantly not there I think I am ritefully mad Tell me am I right I’d like to hear a unbiased opinion And no even if I do I want take this off as it is a learning experience for this author and any who come by and read this No one can find **** they like without tags There is no built in tags like outher sites so you have to take 5 fucking seconds to put it in your synopsis and yes this will be posted 3 times Don’t make the mistake of thinking I’m hunting novels cus I’m not if I come by a non harem novel that is in taged and says nothing no indicator I will put this here If there is a indicator like In the synopsis the mc tracing with his harem ect then we are cool if you put the mc traveling with his girl then I won’t put hate but this non raging **** needs to stop And no I do not have a shinny surface to see how many blood vessels I’m poping in this rant
im the author I will still shamelessly give myself 5 stars and now I found out I can give myself power stones im even more shameless======================================================================================================
im cliff kun hoping that I did ok for a first time novel and also pls give all the feedback also I'm a little shameless rating my self five stars lol hope this douse the trick
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Hey wtf? So I gave 5 star to respect the author. It's his story so I respect it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . This is warzone 😂
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Ima be shameless cus Some scrub gave a bad review I don’t really care this is just to prove a point lol trololol And his name is cliffkun. Why am I doing this again. Jibrish jibrish mumble Hentai I. The background me marking pewdiepie references
Fuck you rabid butterfly **** you rabid butterfly Ima be shameless ima be shameless Teach you cliffkun a are the most savage biengs in existence trust me I know bieng in this race sucks.
I didn't read it because I despise the author. See how you like your own medicine. Putting bad reviews on fics just cause you don't like the work it's based on. Pathetic ****. Don't read this crap.