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Reincarnated in Mount hua sect novel (AU) in a body of a Uchiha and awakens Sharingan . Read his journey to become Illusion sword of Mount Hua and defeat Heavenly Demon.
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寫檢討Very Original, I love it. ............................................................................................................................................
作者 idk_3619
20 chapters in and I have to say its definitely not bad my only complain is that the author makes the story look like a copy of the original novel with one extra character in the background not doing much, I understand the mc desn t have the ability to do anything just yet but the author should make the events that didnt change from the original shorter, instad of writeing a detailed version of Cheong beating some extras for 5 chapters he should make the details shorter or skip over the fights , most of us already know what happened and tbh I feel like I am rereading the original novel and for the ones who dont know it isant that important so writeing it shorter wont hurt the story. At least that s how I see things