摘要
Wei Wushian the Murim's greatest marital artist has died!
Waking up in the realm of cultivation he finds himself in the body of cripple.
The Heaven's had not abounded him as he found himself with the Martial God System.
Come! Join him on his journey as he becomes the Marital God once more.
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Cover photo from game Idle Saga.
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AuTHoR..update faster..first chp is dope..already hate the princess..bash her and kill her....anyway it cool..keep MC OP.but unilike other stories,,make him hide and use it secretly...like a hiding dragon? like he appears to be a cripple but has a secret identity as an OP MF??keep MC OP...add some romance and fluff...just build it...dont make MC a perverted idiot or make his lovers shallow...if harem keep it small
Really okay. I liked it. Early on so it is hard to tell where it will go? I do like how you can see how much care is being put into this story. Really good. Keep it up.
ce roman a un énorme potentiel ne laisser pas tomber cette fan fic svp ce serait dommage ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
love the book seems very interesting as to where i am and just one small little complaint please upload faster? but keep up the good quality seems very interesting
This novel of mine I intend to be as perfect as possible. If you support my work I appreciate it. I will take criticism but atleast read the story first before that. I hope you enjoy reading my novel if not I hope you find something better. Like Library of Heaven's Path are Desolate Era. I'm writing this for fun. If in the future webnovel would like a contract with me. That would be nice. For now I hope you enjoy my work. Not a professional writer just a fair warning.