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Update: I was touching grass outside all the time, got another job, moved in a new apartment, in another country and left my pc to my little bro while at it, I ain't gonna write on my phote this ff so, sorry not sorry.
Probably I'll continue this work when I'll buy a laptop or something, ciao cacoao guys XD

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DevilRyan

Pumping yourself up after a big win can feel a little awkward. You want to acknowledge your good work, but you don’t want to feel arrogant. It’s that tricky balance of quietly reveling in a job well done without coming off as … well, a jerk. — Do you give yourself enough credit for your own successes? If you aren't then you can do it for me. This Venerable is too humble in my opinion.

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The story is largely incoherent and incredibly difficult to follow. I read over 20 chapters in and most of it is utter random gibberish. Grammer wise it's not very well off either, so that just adds to the confusion. Summerised, this is what I think I've read is the plot: Random person walks through many a dream in the afterlife before ending up possessing Harry Potter and then goes on to torture the Dursleys and Ms Figg who might not be Ms Figg but is a master at potions with a grudge against the potters. Or something... I honestly am not sure.... I wouldn't recommend reading the story if you're not fond of puzzles and don't have painkillers against the headaches on hand

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DaoistzuVmua

thanks for the story. The first chapters are difficult to understand but then it all makes sense, it is also a great continuous story please

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