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A man dies and reincarnates into another world. Grasping the emotions left from his past life, he yearns for a better life. However, the world isn't as simple as it seems.
"Curses?!"
"Demons..?"
"Magic..!"
"Another world..?!"
It seems like his newly-granted life will be wrought with troubles.
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The starting point will be a mixed anime world that includes several slice-of-life as well as supernatural worlds. MC's cheat is not a system. The story will not be fast-paced. For his appearance, he looks similar to Galahad of Fate/Grand Order.
Mix Worlds: Jujutsu Kaisen | Otherworld's Magic is Too Far Behind! | Bocchi The Rock! | Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo
Other Worlds: Familiar of Zero | Danmachi | Fate/Grand Order | Fate/Apocrypha
Chapter 1-14: Mix Worlds
Chapter 15 - 98: Danmachi
Chapter 99 - 115: Fate Grand Order
Chapter 116 - 136: Mix Worlds
Chapter 137 - Latest: Fate/ Apocrypha
Advanced chapters: Pa****n.com/IdleYoungMaster
PS: The list of worlds will be updated as the story proceeds. Also, updates will be one chapter / day during my summer vacation. If you are interested for potential worlds MC would travel, feel free to take a look at the extra chapter.
(Cover art not mine. Source: https://www.zerochan.net/2247928)
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It's kind of boring, the protagonist only trusts the 'experience' of his past life, it has a very unstable and disorganized beginning, we can't even know what we're reading, whether it's the future or the present where the protagonist is living.
Just like other fanfics, it has a great start but suffers progressive degradation in quality. Personally, I liked this fic mostly because of its great grammar and the concept of the MC's ability where he can do a simulation of his own future which was actually just him inheriting memories of his iterations from other timelines that was created due to his choices. There's actually a Mushoko Tensei fanfic that used a similar concept though I forgot the name of said fic. Anyway, my problem with this fic was that the delivery was somehow lacking and oftentimes need context. The same could also be said to the characters who tends to be two-dimensional in characterization and interaction. All in all, I dropped this fic because I couldn't no longer take the cringe. Sorry about that but this was what I felt in reading your fic. Well, despite what I said, please take care and 'hope your fic improves.
This fic is incredibly slow paced, you’ll end up skipping half the chapters. The mc is the classic isekai protagonist or in other words he’s an idiot and a spineless whimp when it comes to women. He keeps forgetting his own plans and past and it’s a complete mess.
It's quite a complicated story. At some point the cheat became like a simulation of the Future as the mc keeps getting depressed with the future iterations. And the main world is quite a mess with magic and curses, dragons, deamons. The story went downhill after the timeskip as the previously stated logic about the cheat got changed. Like even after 4 years and him using his cheat 25 times he is still a B rank mage as in he didn't get any feedback from the cheat while before the timeskip he gets feedback. So yeah it's a timepass read at best now.
A very boring story till now, cause author can't include his readers in any action so they can relate it to themselves. It s mostly about random power spikes that author gives to his mc, not planing etc. Just walking on a street and here you are a power up, and then mc makes such dumb choices, that you start doubting this authors thinking capabilities. Even earning money is of dumb brats way, just daydreaming about how it could have been, if he used situation In 2012-2013
It's a Great Fanfic but if you are planning a harem, can you keep it to minimum like having 3 to 4 people at most. Great Writing, Hope it keeps updating as usual.
I love your multi-fic world building, I just hate your character, he seems so one dimensional at times. He just has this mary sue type of nice harem guy personality.(Giving gifts to people) The fact that you used regression type cheat, is detrimental to the character. I love it when characters uses science and technology to make up the gap of their talent especially when it was shown he struggles alot with beings even with his advanced technology. But now nobu has grown way way too strong(possibly near creator class), there's not a same sense of danger anymore despite the new enemy being very dangerous. I hope the new arcs introduce new threats, because current Nobu solos the verse except that one entity. (Index and honkai should give him a challenge if you decide to add that.)
read till ch 15 but so far everything is really chaotic and scenes changes suddenly for example he was talking to saito and zero, and suddenly scene changes. even power he i setting is confusing as this AU mixed universe has differ kind of powers. sometimes author showed that in combat training he got future knowledge but he does not give wht knowledge he got at the a time but will say it in future chapters which makes is less coordinated, less interesting and more frustrating for readers to connect with the novel. as mentioned in synopsis after ch 15 it will be danmachi so, will give this novel a chance for few more chs hoping for some improvement.
in chapter 1 it says Nobu is 8 years old. But then suddenly in Chapter 3 he is a 5 year old??? what the freak is going on? Is the inconsistancies going to continue for the rest of the story?? if so then i'm out
When one reads a multiverse fanfiction, we expect it to begin with meeting a god that'll give us powers onto our journey, added with cringy sentence and bla bla bla. But this fanfic is different. I can guarantee that this fanfic is going to be the best multiverse fanfiction you'll ever see. The quality is simply out of this world. The mc is not stupid. The mc is not cringy. The mc also has 'cheat' that can allow him to be one of the strongest. and this cheat wouldn't make our mc immediately OP. it's just so fantastic. i highly recommend.
this was a surprisingly good read, i didn't expect the story to go the way it does but in a good sense. the way author develop the character, the world and the plot is written so intricately that i got confused sometimes but that's on me anyway it's a good fanfic and I wish the author the best in their future endeavors
18 chapters and it's quite good... It would have been great if more context was given for those who aren't familiar with the animes...
I have to be honest and say that at first I wasn't one hundred percent serious about this story, but when I read chapter by chapter I was surprised, great writing with wonderful details such as: the fact that you can only have 3 spells, I've read other novels and I didn't I knew about this rule, I went to the wiki and saw that it really exists, that's all this work and the author won me over. I highly recommend reading, great work.
Finally caught up with the latest chapter after four months, and I've reread it. I now understand everything clearly. Love your fic, author. However, there was a bit of rush in delving into the FATE aspect. I think you might have added it on a whim. The writing is great, as always, nothing less than my favorite fanfic author. I've read your previous fic too, and that was amazing as well. All in all, what matters most is that your fics maintain logical consistency. Again, thank you for the amazing fic. I hope you consider making the MC less overpowered; I'd love to see him struggle. [Opps.....My Sadistic Tendency Showing again]
I am definitely a fan of this aside from the short number of chapters everything else is going quite well (especially with the word count) I am loving the mixed worlds development and I like how you're trying to mix and match his skills set and the settings the only but I have here is that there's only like 3 Heroines and 2 of those are side characters at best in the og story lines not saying they're bad characters but id really like it if they had someone like freya (tho I doubt it'll be her) O maybe even aiz added into that group cause hephaustus and artemis don't have enough content for me to get an understanding of their whole personality rather than just a OC borrowing their identity. As for bocchi she's honestly more of a friend there and the only real confirmed heroine is shiina but she technically hasn't even been introduced. I'm hoping you add more world building for the main world (aka add more series) something like idk bleach (just a suggestion cause I doubt bleach will fit in well) or something more normal like dress up darling or some type of martial art anime. As for the next world's to visit personally I'd suggest he goes into the world's of MHA (GET OFA and stockpile energy for his cheat?) Or even BC personally I think black clover would be best because people get their grimoires at 15 and he's like 12 rn so if there's a time skip and he goes to thay world he can at least get a boost towards his spells and learn techniques like mana skin, if all else fails we could send him towards a Sci fi anime world and have him learn the tech to implement it into his magic Anyways I'd definitely appreciate it if you acknowledged some of what I've said maybe not listen but at least take inspiration from it I'm enjoying the series and hope you keep up the good work
揭示劇透 It's amazing, you won't regret it, if you don't understand the chapter, go back to the previous chapter and read until the end, all the chapters make a connection with each other incredibly complete, there is no hole in the plot for being in different times or current,
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This does have spoilers from the latest chapter (directly from chapter 156). This is my second review so don't expect much. Firstly, I do like this fic, it is one of the better ones with sensible plot and overall much better quality then other self-fulfillment and other ones. Now starting with the problems (and although this cannot be held accountable by the author as collage is not something that could be given up just because of a mere fan fic), this update have been getting more and more late. It is not horrible per say, but moving onwards. So far (directly from chapter 156), the story itself seems very... clouded? For example, the main character is going through a problem I will call 'becoming too OP'. The problem he faces now are 'counterable' through work and it doesn't help that his 'cheat' is in essence future knowledge and he is becoming too overpowered by the current chapter. Perhaps this is because of my blurry memories but, at this point, with his countless 'miracles' and 'chances', what is truly stopping him from using them all and achieving a 'good end' in the present through brute force of countless repeats like a regression novel main character? I do remember something about how he still wishes to stay human (though don't quote me on that), all true problems he faces at this point are quite (in my opinion), superficial. The harem problem, the Twilight syndrome (through a true Holy Grail and Greater Grail with now a basically countless 'chances' and 'miracles' and to mention his dream organs and the like). All in all, I feel like the novel should be ending soon (or perhaps I don't quite understand the final problem, the Twilight Syndrome well enough.). Although at the start of the novel when Nobu first got a 'chance' and used it, I feel like that was when the problem started. It was far too easy. Each 'chance' (from what I can remember) was something of several batteries worth of electricity? And if I remember, the first 'chance' was given for free. This 'cheat' was far too much though it was compensated by the fact that his talent in magicka was bad, though it truly doesn't matter with several chances which is what he did. Anyway, at this point in the novel I truly can't see it progressing unless it is more chapters of Nobu getting more power-ups from the various Fate worlds and the like. If I am correct, then the next chapters would be more slice-of-life chapters. In the end, most of these problems may not be problems to some people which is fine. I am merely writing this to please my own satisfaction and vanity and I hope people reading this won't be dissuaded by this long review of mine, this is certainly a lot better than some hot garbage on here and like how I didn't talk about the Danmachi Arc (which was certainly where the main story took place and where everything is showcased.) Ah, now that I think about it, the missed potential of the Familiar Of Zero who (from what I remember) only showed for a small portion of chapters. Anyways, this is just a review from my personal opinion and I hope to those reading enjoy it~[img=recommend]
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I've read all available chapters(16 atm), and the grammars decent. The plot, settings and characters aren't one dimensional but at the moment the pace hasn't slowed significantly for any meaningful development, seems like passing events until the MC ages up. It's not a bad thing per se' but I would like an extra chapter of just the MC's daily life before Danmachi, or an interlude from the JJK side on how or if his presence is felt by them knowingly or not. The author definitely know the multitude of settings here so I commend them on that, especially since it's a fusion. My only critique is the pacing, other than that solid fanfic.I also love the goldenfinger well thought out for an MC with no background in any of the supernatural factions. I'll be looking forward to more, the JJK caught my attention but the authors diligence is why I will keep reading.
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