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A man who is a history teacher finds himself in ancient Mesopotamia. Now he has become a God. he saw this as luck, and instead of being an ordinary person, he will rise to the top as a God.
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寫檢討This is actually one of the best books I’ve read please do not stop uploading this I will give you 3 power stones everyday
This is a fine example of a cardboard MC. Now you could argue that God's should be apathetic like that. And certainly you're entitled to your opinion. But you'd be wrong. No matter how much he wants to allude to, he doesn't really have any future plans. He's just going with the flow. Anyways onto details:Writing Quality(3/5): I still feel like I'm giving it too much but I'll stand on 3. I assume the author's first language is not English. There are a lot of spelling mistakes, let alone grammar. This work hasn't been proofread tbh, at least it seems so to me. The writing style is close to MTL. The portrayal of emotions and interactions feel fake. I would suggest the author to read a lot of emotional stories to get a hang of the flow. Story development(2/5): It's not developing, rather regressing. Characters are literally doing random things out of nowhere and everything seems to go on and on. Even then the story isn't progressing much. It's like the more they learn, the more they make mistakes. The more they make mistakes, the more they repeat it. And the MTL like English doesn't help you much. At times I was so confused that whether I'm even reading the same story or not. I might be wrong but that isn't what an author should want to write. Do a bit longer PoVs and label them. Dont't just write after watching anime. It's a visual media, hence we can handle seeing many things happening at once. In text format it requires a bit of labeling to draw the picture. Character Design(2/5): The MC is bad. Not the bad bad, rather the design is bad. He's a God, a Sumerian god(or at least from that age) at that. He's in nasuverse at the beginning phase of the Age of the Gods. And he's scared about Butterfly effect. I honestly don't know who's the idiot here. Once again He's a God. Like his existence itself didn't make any ripples already. Okay, now he's scared so what does he do? Nothing. Like literally nothing. Compared to how active other sumerian gods were in nasuverse, this guy does nothing. His far too short sighted. For a god, his powers are under-developed and under-explored. His plans really have no depth to it not does his character. It's like reading a summary report when it comes to the MC. Tbh other characters are like that as well. They come off as toys with no personality aside from the forced instance during their introduction. Only one small time villain had a bit of character. Updating Stability will mostly have 5 stars from me. So that's that. World background(3/5): Ngl, I love nasuverse. But this is honestly under-explored in this fic. I Don't want to judge too harshly but So far nothing much have been explored. Overall(3/5): Try it if you want but honestly this one needs a rewrite in future. If you can get over the MTL like writing style, full arrogance with no substance, constant nativity of a God, cardboard characters with no depth and totally random contradictory actions and consequences then congratulations, you found your ideal fic.
If I have a mistake, please let me know. Actually, I wasn't going to make an evaluation that I was embarrassed about, but when some writers did, I said why don't I do it. If you have a good idea or a better topic idea, let me know.
Bellow average story but that’s okay with me this is only to pass time. What did Rick me off hard is the lack of information the author has like he doesn’t know basic info about gods/divine spirits, authority, mystery, and the reverse side of the world but yet he decided to write a FATE fanfic in ancient Mesopotamia about just that.
作者 Ulgen
the mc is stupid idiot who is very lazy if he wants to get out he just work hard for it but did he do he did nothing he just let his people what an idiot