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摘要
Random Hunter A. "It's a legend among hunters."
Random Hunter B "He is my idol!"
Ging "Raigo ? He's the one who taught me Nen..."
Netero "He's the only one who can resist my fist..."
Chrollo "He taught me nen, but he wants to hit me because I've become a criminal! What did I do in response? Nothing, I could only let myself be hit sensei is too strong!"
Maha "Him? Sorry, the Zoldick family does not accept any business related to him..."
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Writing- good enough though beware there are traps everywhere Story development- too early too few Character design- big brain time boi Updating stability- hmmmmmm World background- its the fooking hxh world. what? Is there to say? Have some meme
This story sucks I cant even get past the 2nd chapter it sucks so bad! Born a Uchiha with only 1 sharingan? That's impossible also he has Uchiha blood so why cant he deactivate his sharingan he's not a case like Kakashi? I'm not reading any further unless someone wants to spoil the story and tell me something actually interesting that happens.
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I am sorry but I am just top lazy at the Moment so please make this easy for me and just check out the Story so that I won't have to describe it and write how I feel about the Novel/Book Thanks boyz/girls
finally an si with no 3 wishes and acts like a actual person -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Nice work, comrade! ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Beware the Main Character is a capital D, Dumbass, He thinks he can grow strong from just training in the academy, as a 7-year-old, "Barely has any chakra" because he is 7, your body main develops in your **** years, look at naruto, He was trash in the academy, but was he hits 13, oh boy, his growth is monstrous, same with people like Sasuke or Sakura, or even Itachi.
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Un muy buen fanfic me gusto mucho creo que tiene potencial y lo que mas me gusta es el personage y su sed de aventura, espero con ansias el desarrollo de esta historia, sobre todo como se desarrollara el personaje principal y cuales seran sus objetivos
while the synopsis was pretty ballsy but it's great so far, 11chaps in, so I'm looking forward to where the author takes us!!!!! good luck :D
Keep writing, please. I'm really enjoying your work. Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.
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only 4 chapters so I cant say much but I think it has potential. b b . n. b. b. b . b. b. b. b b.
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Like always I love this. I'm waiting for more. ---------------_-------------------------------------------------------·-------·-----------------------------–—_---------------------------------------------------------------------
I has come to show my support and now a song by a mad king Gunter, why did you gunt my fries? I gunted them, and they were mine. What kind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries, And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes? Gunter, there were tears there. If you gunted them, would you even care?Gunter, do you even love me?
Is mc sharigan always on like in naruto or can he have it turn on and off with his own will now Hope you continue this Book And will there be romance if there is who will it be
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Despite having few chapters the story is very good so far, and best of all and about HxH one of the top 5 animes ever made for most people, I hope that the author keeps a constant in the releases, because many who write about HXH end up dropping, this is due to the fact that HxH has not yet been completed and the complexity of the anime's energy system, which in my view is the most creative and diverse energy system ever made in anime.