摘要
Mike transmigrated into a world with swords and magic. Immediately, he acquired a fitness gym.
He was invincible in the gym. The stronger he grew, the size of the area in which he was invincible grew larger too.
However, the prerequisite of him becoming stronger was to have more people working out in his gym.
Mike came up with all sorts of ways to gradually increase the visitors coming to his gym.
The people in this alternate world realized that compared to other gyms, the result of their exercise was more prominent when they worked out in Mike’s gym. On the other hand, Mike also realized that he gained something every time someone worked out in his gym.
[Ding! Someone is training their muscles using the machines. Strength +1]
[Ding! Someone is running on the treadmill. Speed +1]
[Ding! Someone is doing yoga. Tenacity +1]
As more and more people worked out in his gym, Mike was slowly on his path of becoming invincible!
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I like the concept, but I dislike the execution. It feels more like a face slapping novel set in a not very well defined gym than a novel about the owner of a gym system. I really do like the concept though, if I ever have time to write a system novel then a gym one would now be on the top of my list of topics to choose from.
Trash story. Trash story. Trash story. Trash story. Trash story. Trash story. Trash story. Trash story. Trash story. Trash story. Trash story. Trash story.
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Mc is pretty dumb and the story is set to build him up. Pretty bland and boring it has some good contents in it but the mc makes it pretty bad. I don’t recommend it.
If you like one very slow main story with constant side stories that follow other characters that constantly talks about how great whatever the mc did is then this will be perfect for you. I get having one or two side stories for entertainment and to keep a story fresh but when that is the whole story I will pass.
i actually like these kind of story..like building various kind of shop in fantacy world.but this story felt very bland.very good thread but written very badly.there is no soul in story.felt like a child telling a story. translation: even mtl better than this.
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I liked how the chapter titles look like youtube video titles, an example is: I went to the gym for 30 days, got strong? or after discovering the gym james no longer leaves it.
This is an interesting story. Some places were questioning others ok. 😊😊😒😒⛰📚📙📖📘📗📕✏️📝📰💻 This story could better pop in a lot of ways.
Muito bom a tradução muito boa a estabilidade também o desenvolvimento da história e a melhor o desing do personagem pra foi +ou- deixa a desejar e o fundo de mundo ótimo
Seems like they translated the wrong language with google translate. Absolutely unforgivable English. Sha sha word requirements are el met..
This sounds like Black Tech Internet Cafe except for fitness, and honestly Im all for it. Brb in a bit and will tell my opinion on this novel
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