/ Eastern / I Obtain An Immortal Heavenly Technique At The Start
摘要
Luo Tiange transmigrated to ancient times and became the Divine Son of Qilin of a noble family. Unfortunately, he was banished into the Hell of Demons and was doomed to remain there forever.
He activated the Refining System, which enabled him to extract and refine the source of all things. At the very start, he acquired the Immortal Heavenly Technique.
[Ding! You refined a phoenix. Source power +1. Immortal Heavenly Technique +1]
[Ding! You refined a Zhuyan. Source power +5. The World of Dharma +1]
[Ding! You refined a Golden Crow. Source power +10. Destructive Light of Catastrophe +1]
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There were savage beasts everywhere in the Hell of Demons. All of them served as good materials for Luo Tiange’s Refining System.
With the incident where he was wrongly accused etched in his mind, he gritted his teeth and quietly strengthened himself. On the day when he left this Hell, a crisis that involved the entire Dayan Domain began.
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Translation is garbage, names and genders keep changing, the story is unoriginal and has been done to death, i honestly don't understand how anyone still reads this sort of garbage, we've had a novel like this every week for the past year.
The clichè banished young master again? Come on! We need new setting!!!!!! It would have been good if he lived as a young master and bully others on daily basis instead
looking on the bright side, I managed to read up to chapter 12, anything beyond that I would become an amoeba..............................................
so bad, translation is trash, powerlevel trash everything is trash.................. . .....................................................
First chapters I thought it would be good but a few chapters later the translator can't even tell the mc gender and the power level is F*cked Sometimes the mc is Strong sometimes he is weak From my opinion it's not worth reading but i will try to finish it to chapter 40
pretty normal Chinese cultivation story involving transmigrated person, low quality translation and edit. I suggest you don't read this novel.
Mentioned a lot of shes instead of hes Got me confused on the gender of the main character No explanation on the cultivation tiers or even the ranks
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Wow. Name changes every chapter. The MC sometimes acts like a transmigrant, sometimes a native. Some sentences wholly make no sense. Translations sucks, and MC doesn’t even know if the original body of his actually committed the crime.
so many grammatical errors. In every chapters, either weight classification changed i.e. pounds, Jun , carries and once time to Freaking Kilometer. Story seems good but lacking the grandiose the author wants to convey.
Not what i hoped ...................................... ....................................................................................
I am speechless this is the most rediclous novel i read in my life Wow.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Как понять сильный персонаж или слабый? Никто не знает, все повествование "бум" и "бам" и "какой он сильный!". Вообще не понятно ничего, ни каким образом его предали, ни как работает система в некоторые моменты. Просто мусор
Bad translation and too cliche. ............................................................................................................
This needs to get picked. Flaws: -Poor worldbuilding -The cultivation realms have not been explained yet (CH 19) -Story is shallow -Slightly wonky translations, still very understandable though. I’ve read far worse, this is very much tolerable. Merits: -Fun read. -Better than most of the stuff that gets picked nowadays. -Decently conceptualised system. Overally I’d give this a 3/5 it I’m giving it a 5 cuz I want it to get picked.
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worst novel ever ............, ..............................................................................................m.mmmm..........
Unreadable. There's machine translation and then there's... whatever this is. The horribly cliched story doesn't do it any favors either. I couldn't make it past chapter 3.
开局获得不死天功 Finally found this one 300+ chapters no clue how it is