摘要
If you are looking for action and mafia stories, please try this one. The story will begin like a typical wish-fulfillment story, but I promise you that the plot will become better the more chapters you read.
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Arlan was fired by the company he was working for after being framed by his Supervisor. Filled with rage and indignance from the injustice, he left the company building with heavy strides.
He was only a contractual worker in the construction company so he wasn’t able to save a lot of money. The cash left in his bank account was only enough to last him for a few days. If he couldn’t find a job in the next few days, he might even have to live on the streets.
While sitting on a roadside bench, he grabbed his phone and searched for jobs online. Suddenly, an advertisement popped up on his screen, and automatically downloaded a shady app.
[Do you want to claim your daily reward?]
Those were the words that flashed on the screen of Arlan’s phone when he accidentally downloaded the shady app. When he pressed the [Yes] button, the screen suddenly lit up and showed the words:
[Congratulations on claiming 100,000!]
[The money has already been deposited in your account!]
It was the beginning of his journey of becoming a super rich big boss!
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Note: The setting of the story is in a parallel world of Earth.
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寫檢討I usually don't like these types of novels but since this is an original, I decided to give it a chance and it was definitely worth the read, wish there was more to read currently.
When i first picked this novel, i just wanted a light read, something to take my mind off some problems, but holy cow, that escalated quickly. I read about 190 chapters and it keep you hooked. At first, all was good, money kept flowing, power ups here and there, and overall, a good novel. But then, all got nasty, zombie apocalypse, people dying, countrys overrun by flesh eating mutants, global panic, all the good stuff, everywhere except the mc base, where everything is still peaceful. This novel lets you see the other side of the coin. Until now, almost every work lets you see the struggle of the ordinary man, who battles hunger, zombies, other humans. But not this novel, this one lets you see the struggle of the government, who tries desperately to save as many people as they could, and it is honestly a bit refreshing. As for the not so good things about this novel is the time frame in which everything happens. it is little over 3 months (100 days), the mc has a massive change in personality, going from a broke construction worker to a tycoon who commands hundreds of thousands of peoples, have massive military prowess, and is somehow able to command them to a point where his power rivals a whole country, all while managing to hide his power from the government in fear of being labeled as an extremist who tries to usurp the leading power. Another weak point about this novel is character design. the mc is so poorly designed that he feels like a puppet who just goes with the flow. There is no emotional development, Arlan Roa is the same dude from start to finish, always good at talking to very important people, even though he was just a construction worker just a week ago. Where the author kinda managed to put some emotions in his mc, is when he meets his parents and started to cry because he managed to give them a better life, but except that, a lifeless puppet. Overall, a good novel, maybe a little bit more romance, but a good novel nonetheless. I hope the author gets it to at least 500 chapters, it has potential for at least that many. Again, a wonderful novel, definitely going to stick to it, and i hope it doesn't get dropped.P.S.Some extra chapters about important side caracters are more than welcomed, i would love for some development in that area.
揭示劇透everything in this novel is literal Chinese urban get rich quick type of novel, save a person family you just meet *check, get a villa *check, get a apartment from someone for something to you did for the moment circumstances *check, get company shares *check, let's bring the person I saved family into my house instead of handing for the over to police for safety, bruh it is literally the Chinese urban formula, other than name and better translation everything is literally the same..... aight ima head out.
This was a decent book until chapter 69. The problem I have and this goes for a lot of these types of novels, is that they knowledge that would theoretically come in the next 100 years such as him getting the flying car technology. Him having an AI bodyguard that is a living person as well not to mention. I personally do not like that these were added as I feel it ruins a flow of a story heavily and begins to ruin any sort of normality in the world. The writing quality was decent, updates seems to be stable, but the story in later chapter does not match the quality in the earlier ones.
pretty boring, so far its been cliche agter cliche. gets the perfect opportunity to use his new talents, save the girl and her family, etc
A good story so far as of chapter 8. Some grammar issues but they do not take away from the story. I rated update stability as 4 star because the author takes breaks regularly
This is an enjoyable read but sadly it’s only free to read the first 30 something chapters. I am pretty picky and harsh with criticism but I genuinely like the novel.
The check in for rewards tends to be a rather brain dead genre. at least if you like logic and have a hard time following some degree of societal collapse, massive inflation, and hoping the mc grows out Noveau Riche ways.I've read a few of the genere as i was bored enough. maybe only one or two were better than this one in my opinion. based on the stereotype I've heard, the side characters fit. i hate that some of the antagonists and confrontational language is as basic as it gets.I've read all the free chapters. i might not look for a way to read the premium chapters. but let's see.my boredom still remains.author, i don't know if you've already done this. but if you haven't. a guy whose wealth comes in as fast your mc might manage his wealth by making donations. you maybe have him investing or acquiring everything. that's just my two cents. given that i may or may not return. it might not be that significant to you at all
great start to book . i have high expectations from this book based on wine store and king of herbs . may you blessed by creativity and write awesome novel
So starting off i ignored all the forced plots for u just so that there can be a starting base.....After getting money he spends as if he doesn't care much, made or forget the value of money huh?.......HATE when he helps a stranger girl and brings her to Royal Territory...I get that he might make mistakes at starting but he ignores and parents and brings that girl....bro i m just quitting
It's like your Chinese get-rich novels but it is better than those, writing quality is good, and this novel is for those people who want to escape reality, while I want a story with a good plot and stuff. Does not float my boat. But if you want to escape reality with a hint of a slice of life and chill-type novels this is for you. Good job author
The MC is a very big simp and idiot I am not saying this because he is good or anything but because he truly behaves like an idiot and it is not like he is a good person either. Reading this novel filled me with disgust towards the MC could not even finish the free chapters. This is obviously only my opinion because I don't like simps but what I said is true.
作者 Malignant
Author here. This is my first try at writing a novel with a modern setting so please be lenient with me. I hope that you guys will give it a try and feel free to comment down your suggestions. I also don’t have an editor so please let me know if you see any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes. Thank you.