摘要
I...AM...MOB CHARACTER!!!
Sigh~
My name is Samael, I was an office sla- I mean a worker who worked 9 to 5. It was a daily routine of monotony until one fateful day when I went home only to find my best friend with my girlfriend. Betrayal was the first thing I felt, followed by rage.
And after taking ‘care’ of them, My surroundings changed…
Looking at my reflection in a mirror, I noticed my appearance had changed. Gone was the face of the disgruntled office worker; instead, "SAMAEL ASHWOOD!!!" a character from a novel I used to read. But this wasn't just any character; I had become him—the sacrificial best friend of the protagonist who was betrayed and died in just the first two chapters.
PROTAGONIST DIED!?
[Heavenly Destiny System Initializing...]
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A/N
A vast world where power is law!
There are many protagonists to plunder from!
Tags: #Yandere Heroines, #Teacher-Student Relationship, #Elves, #Demons, #Beastmen #Maid, #Vampire, #Angel, #Incest...Etc
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I like the characters so far and the best part is. that unlike the MANY "extra" novels out there. This is one of the rare few that's a harem! #monogamy boring as hell
I like everything thing about the story but you locked the chapters sir/madam because the story is good I was expecting locked chapters like from the 100th chapter or so but not so early . It is not everyone in the world willing the buy coins and it is likely mostly kids and young adults on this app now I have to watch videos and check in the get a pass to continue reading. I was talking about something similar with another author but he was moving like he does not respect his readers when it is them that are paying him . Well I hope you continue the story that's all.
Kind of feels like it was written by ChatGPT, I can’t see a real person describing things like that.
It’s getting annoying everyone’s getting increasingly more foolish ngl and I hate foolish mcs and characters so I’m out so many holes in the story and it’s just 32 ch dropped
I was expecting an exciting story from the title but, i get dissapointed by how the story goes. First the story is a mess. There is some incosistency in the story here and there. There are some small and big incosistency. The little incosistency is like in the first chapter author forgot MC is running away and suddenly he was inside his house. MC character also a little weird. MC said he knows all the nook and cranny of the novel but he was monologuing like a clueless person. I knew author want to make him like acting so other people didn't suspect him but, as the reader we don't need that. MC said Samael dead in chapter 2, but the start of the story in which novel he transmigrated into is weird. Like if i remember it right he said story start when protagonist go with some expidition team to dungeon. but dozen of chapter later he said it was just about to start. The plot of his father kidnapping his wife is also weird. just so you know at the end of the day MC goes cronfront his own father. What the use of kidnapping someone if you just need to call them and in the end they will came. The character emotion development also a little rushed. They just suddenly has fellings, like MC who suddenly accept his new family where before he just get betrayed by his friend. and how some character suddenly love him. If author just make it a novel with reincarntion story in the fantasy world. It didn't need to be on a novel (which will fixed some confution when reading it). Just make him a guy who got a seccond chance to live a new life with some system. As far as the story go it felt that way. be didn't felt like a mob character. More like some dude who got reincarnated.
I really enjoy the story till now, I hope it will get more intresting in the future. keep it bro.
it's good story till now . Can't predict about the future storyline .But I guess it will be a good one . I just hope author don't drop the novel like many other authors does .....
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kinda boring novel good Cheats but yeah boring mc i drop This i kinda Like the Cheats but i can't sadly contin with this mc
I didn’t read yet but I’m glad mc actually got his revenge/ satisfying end before leaving to the novel world, so for that, this gets five stars.. tho I may update after reading.
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
I couldn't even finish the first chapter. What's with the flowery words and use of descriptive words? I couldn't even focus on what's happening, the words just make me cringe and the problem is that some of the paragraphs make no sense. Learn to be a writer instead of a poet and then continue writing.
This is... this is too disgusting. From the narration written by ChatGPT to his thoughts and words, which are so ridiculously childish, I question his maturity. When he sees a rat die in an alley, he feels a pang of guilt. And the funny thing is, he thinks and feels more in one chapter than I do in a day, lol. Almost everything in this world has no logic. From the royal family to his mother to his family.
The story seems a bit stupid mc goes to the dungeon without informing his family that he will be late... Acts like he doesn't know what is the situation when he knows the whole story... Fml, a experiment subject kept at a normal prison and without proper guards... System appears out of nowhere... Mc's family is treated as a outcast within the family when mc's mother is a 7th circle mage and strongest in the kingdom... And mc's family gets abducted when his mother is that powerful and mc is going to save them when he's nowhere near strong... The writing style and situations felt unnatural and not thought out...
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