/ Book&Literature / I am Tom Marvolo Riddle
摘要
Finding yourself reincarnated in 1926 Britian was one thing, but finding that you were the apparent most horrible dark lord the wizarding world had ever seen was another. Knowing that the world was goi 3Dng to be plunged into a war and a dark lord would rise was just the icing on the cake. Join Tom as he embarks on trying to protect himself in a wizarding world that he had read about in his previous life.
I DO NOT OWN ANYTHING RELATED TO HARRY POTTER OR THE COVER IMAGE!!
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Dude, first of all, I've read hundreds of webnovels and I must say that the series is not bad. Although there is much to be improved, I believe it can do it. For now, I can suggest you to write in a little more detail, you made everything very simple, I understand that the main character has voldemort memories, but when you write it like this, it has no depth. Especially if you don't want the character interactions to be like cardboard, you should write them more carefully. But don't mind if you're just writing for fun :) good luck. PS: I wrote this from google translate, I'm sorry if you don't understand while reading.