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摘要
Issei was a normal kid with normal friends not knowing what his life would and not knowing about the supernational world until one day he met someone who gave him a new type of power and now with his life upside down what will be do especially with luck not in his side
fanfic
Harem?
will have some shit and some conversation you guys may not like also this is an au so if the character don't act like they should that is the answer
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This is more of a constructive criticism, I think the story is interesting but very difficult to read, as the dialogues are not clear, the distinction between dialogues and the rest of the text is not clear.
Grammar itself sucks, if you don't know who's talking to who. and the premise is interesting, but what I've seen is that the MC doesn't have a name, or is just a spectator.
Please Improve your writing quality.The story is good.If you have problems I can even do it for you for free.I just want you to finish this story and don't get discouraged.Everybody has problems ag beginning so good luck.
this book is REALY difficult to read, i am talking mtl level where you only have a general image of what is going on, plus there is no diference between thoughs, dialogue and narration, but the story is good so it keeps me from giving it just a single star