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I am the first Vampire

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I died.

Than I got reincarnated.

Than I died again.

Than I got revived, but no longer as a human.

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At chapter 15, tread lightly.

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Ouranos_Gein

The story is really bad, I feel like there are way too many plot holes from the fact of how Nora managed to turn him into a vampire, how she solved the sunlight problem, the escaped cultists, the knowledge of diverse technology that would be incredibly tough to make even for university grads, (he is a high school graduate only goddamnit, how can he know how to produce electricity, harness it, make electrical hardware enough to build TV's and computers, programming for the computers of course and servers like wtf? He probably needs 5 different degrees for that ****) the fact that he is making TV, computers when there is nothing to watch, nor anything to use the gadgets for, the vague and lack of explanation for his abilities, the lack of acknowledgement by your MC that he is now a 30 year old man,not to mention the need for editing your chapters,..etc Tried my best but this the drop zone, this is not a story with plot holes, these are plot holes with story in them

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4yr
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BRENO_SOARES_007

Essa obra era boa até ele se tornar um vampiro, mas depois algumas coisas que não foram explicadas começaram a aparecer. Se vampiros não existiam nesse mundo como Nora sabia como criar ghouls? E o que aconteceu com aqueles cultistas que fugiram? E porque diabos ele iria criar uma utopia para vampiros e colocar sua existência em risco? Essa obra não tem furos de roteiro, ele tem um buraco colossal nela

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9mth
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Atlas2312

very well i like this book. it was fun to read it. but it's sad that it was just that short. i would like a continuation. sorry for mistakes my English isn't the best.

4yr
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