摘要
"When you don't understand love from time,you miss a lot"
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4.8
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Keep up the good work writer, it was easy to follow along and I hope that there will be plenty of stable updates in the future[img=update]
The storyline is quite captive and good writing skill can hooked a reader to follow this book.....a nice piece of harwork I read..the characters are intriguing and good world background... keep it up, author
Great piece of writing... I love the book, it has great character design and world development. I personally love the beginning, the book is just fabulous. Keep up the good work 👏🏾...
The story has mysterious vibe in the beginning because the guy's identity is still hidden. But one thing I wanted to suggest is that, you can try give a space after the full stop.
12/10/2022 Dear author, I'm glad to say that you have an amazing talent of delivering your thoughts with others.It is hard to be live that it's your first time ever like you're really well polished Impressive[img=recommend]
Hi Viewers😊,I hope you all are enjoying my novel and I am starting to make it more interesting. Please wait and keep reading, I really need your complements, I am writing all this for you and I hope you will like it very much.You all can carry me forward😊😇
it will prove to be a great novel.I have read the initial part of it but i would like to read more.i hope it will be very good😊
I look forward to your writing. Writers love knowing their work is read. ... I wish I could write like you. ... You write how I feel, even if I can't express it❤️😋. ... Keep writing ❤️🤞 That's was amazing.....
Dear Author, first of all, I don't believe this is your first piece of writing; it's very well written, with excellent descriptions of the tone and mood; all I want is that you be more explicit in your description of the environment, though your first paragraph was definitely compelling, Keep Writing 😊
Ahh i just loved this story and the way you describe father daughter love it makes me feel so cute😍but i am sad for LARA's father whose father is a cancer patient:(
Nice story development , though there is some mistake in writing but still it's understandable . Keep up the good work , no matter what keep on writing and moving forward
I love how it started. The storyline has a great blend of mystery and suspense. The writing quality is good. The plot is interesting, and the characters' situations are well detailed.
Overall much many have stated before the overall product could use some editing and polishing. While the chapters are not long, it can appear longer with those errors. The formatting of the story also threw me out of place a couple times. though despite that, there are a few positives. Lara as a character is quite interesting to see. I am curious to see more of thus book in the future. perhaps after the polishing, then I will once again review it.
personally, I think that this novel is a true gem with a potential. I like how descriptive and detailed the novel is. I'm only a few chapters in but I'm really hooked. I can't wait for more chapter uploads 😊
Nice story. Interesting plot. Storyline is great. Though your usage of punctuation and paragraphing could use some work. Great room for improvement. Keep it up.
let me just start with read This!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 There's only a few books in my life that have ever caught my attention and this is the best one ! I love the characters and how the author describes them❤❤❤keep it up Author
Great beginning, I really appreciate your work and the storyline and writing skills are amazing😊.keep writing. I want to read it further.😍
Overall this novel is quite good. But there might be some grammatical and punctuation errors, they are not a biggie. And the paragraph spacing, sometimes it's not done properly otherwise e everything is good.
"When you understand love from time, you'll miss a lot." That line gives a very impactful impression that is sure to hook you. The writing quality is decent. Improvement is a learning process. It's already a good story but given the time, it might be better.