/ Anime & Comics / I'AM~Destroy Spirit Ring Doulo
摘要
There is no system, money martial arts, and innate soul power are only at the third level, and the apprentice master is even rejected, and can't be licked dog Tang-san and Xia Wu . Su Xing is angry, it is better to ask for others than to ask for himself, after all, he was also a scholar in his previous life. Relying on the exploration of soul power, soul ring and soul spirit, and soul battle, Su Xing successfully walked out of the path of being a strong man of his own. No matter how strong you are, let me hit with my spirit money. Take the route of self-development of soul skills! Soul rings, soul battle, etc., No need be licked dog because i'am Transmigrator too. so good bye
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Just want review myself
1.if you ask what link i Will silent and why i'am upload this fanfic if i just can give link and don't do anything else i just give link for next chapter and be lazy to update
2.its not from mtl this from outside site , why always mtl , are you mtl worker so you promo on this content ???
3. i'am using translate from PC so what if you don't like this translate then don't read i'am not force you to read,and you can't force me,you dont pay me (and vote just to motivate to update not to pay )
4.and of you want complaine my translate why not you translate funfic who have good story' so i Will critic you
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i had high hope for it but its a dissapoinment.Rape really.he thinks with his dick.rape is not for me bro.translation is readeble👎👎👎👎👎👎
Not sure If this isn't all just google translated from some Chinese writer (very hard to read sometimes) but the story itself in essence is very good. Whoever wrote all those stories is a genius at writing Soul Land fanfics. Very creative.
The protagonist is similar to Yun Che. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. .. ... ... .. ... .
Just want review myself 1.if you ask what link i Will silent and why i'am upload this fanfic if i just can give link and don't do anything else i just give link for next chapter and be lazy to update 2.its not from mtl this from outside site , why always mtl are you mtl worker so you promo on this content 3. i'am using translate from PC so what if you don't like this translate then don't read i'am not force you to read,and you not pay me (and vote just to motivate to update not to pay ) 4.and of you want complaine why not you translate funfic who have good story' so i Will critic you
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Wow! Another bad mtl translation of a chinese fanfiction with no links to nor permission from the original? This man must truly have no women on his phone.
I really wanted to get into this one in the MTL, but MC kept being called Waking Up instead of Su Xing. It was a chore to figure out his name, I'm giving 5 stars since I like DD/Soul Land. Good stuff
translation is so botched, cant even get the name right ........................................................a..a..a.a.a.a..a.a.a..a.a.a.a..a.a.a.a.
La idea es simplemente fenomenal rompe los conceptos de la edad de un anillo espiritual y lo hace de una forma fantástica implementado ideas de otros mundos
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saya menghargai karya anda dan walaupun ada beberapa yang tidak sesuai dengan keinginan saya pribadi,tapi saya akan tetap menilai ini sudah cukup bagus....semoga author bisa semakin mengembangkan karya tulis anda dan membuat ceerita yang lebih menarik lagi untuk kedepannya.....
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amazing translation "Harem MC" .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
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amazing translation .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
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sorry but it's unreadable for me, i hope someone could fix and edit it, it has good concept but like most Fanfic by this author the english is so bad.