/ Anime & Comics / Humanity's Campione (HP/Campione)
摘要
Harry had been looking forward to Dursley's trip to Italy. Even if they didn't really want to bring him, worried about his "freakishness" he'd never gotten to visit another country so it was exciting. Unfortunately, he ran into a member of a Mage Association investigating rumours of a Heretic God appearance, and it spiraled from there. Next thing he knew, he was facing a blonde-haired man wearing just a leaf, and he'd become a Campione - God Slayer.
標籤
-- 推薦票
榜單 
-- 推薦票 你也許也喜歡
35評論
4.8
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUBGUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUBGUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUBGUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB GUB (idk)
The story is about Harry Potter becoming a Campione after killing a rogue god in a crossover world of Campione, Harry Potter, and Highschool DxD. This actually turned out to be a good story. It is perhaps a bit hard to read for those who haven't read or seen the stories this fanfic is based on as it doesn't go in-depth describing the background. However, for those who know what's going on, it is very interesting with the powers that Harry receives as a Campione and the characters he interacts with. Character-wise, the protagonist isn't an arrogant idiot who thinks he's an "Alpha!" Thank god for this. It's so annoying seeing authors creating characters like that since it just points out how stupid they are. Real alpha characters would have behavior that show's that they're alpha rather than some loser justifying how everything he does is alpha and how beta everyone else is the entire story. The main character of this novel behaves like a normal decent human. From what has been written so far, he isn't a dense Japanese protagonist, so relationships are expected to develop at an average to fast rate. So far, so good.
Please update more frequently................Please update more frequently................Please update more frequently................Please update more frequently................Please update more frequently................Please update more frequently................Please update more frequently................Please update more frequently................Please update more frequently................Please update more frequently................Please update more frequently................Please update more frequently................Please update more frequently................
I like it has a good start so far. and seems to be drawing me into read more. if you can keep up even a half decent upload schedule I think this fic can go far
[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Pretty good story so far... I just think it might be developing a little bit fast as far as Harry acquiring authorities. I do look forward to Salvador Donni challenging Harry to a fight. It would be really interesting to see how he takes Harry learning sword fighting so fast while fighting him. I also can't wait to see what the wizards think when he starts using magic with the magic circle and no wand. Harry should start looking into creating his own circle to use. That would be something that Kuroka could help him create.
Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please
Update More Please[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]................................................................................................................................
Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please Chapter please
Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please
the history is very interesting and have much potential please post more chapters faster i am very anxious to read the continuation of the history
if you like harry potter breaking his shackels of being a sheep for slaughter, you will like this ff. so far its only the fith chapter, but so far its great. grammer good. characters so far are good ( even tho there is only five chapters so far). this is also a re write so yeah.
I love how seamlessly the world's of Harry Potter and Campione come together in this story. I hope you continue to update this story but I hope above all else that you also have fun while writing it. good luck on future endeavors and most importantly have fun while writing.
Only thing holding back from a 5 is that update game though Yeah this rest is filler Filler FILLER ITS JUST FILLER OKAY DEAL WITH IT!!!!
this is a really fantastic fanfic. campioni is one of my favorite animes and it is really underappreciated when it comes to fanfics. it works perfectly because it can't be only can only be created when a witch and a person defeating God and with Harry being a wizard he doesn't need a witch. seems like a really difficult story to write so take your time I really appreciate it.
揭示劇透 
Pretty good, keep it up -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
so far this is quite interesting of a story I love when harry potter and Campione are combined its fun to watch the wand wavers cower and run like headless chickens and you adding dxd is a nice touch I'm hoping for more chaps soon keep up the great work