/ Anime & Comics / Hulk vs DC
摘要
The Hulk is drawn into a portal that transports him into the DC Universe.
(Hey there! I'm new to writing, so if you have any feedback, please be gentle and offer constructive criticism. Thanks!)
(English is my first language lol)
(If the wording and paragraphs sound like AI, it's because I used Grammarly to revise a lot of the content.)
(It will not be a harem story. I'm sorry, I also enjoy a harem story like any other person. But I'm not comfortable and don't have the experience to write that)
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6評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
It goes by too fast, needs more substance between one action and the next. Besides that a great story.
so far I think it's really good and would say has great potential though that depends on the follow on chapters
Mc acts like a 2 year old who got super powers ............................................................................................................................
Thank you for reading!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know if will create more chapters to make it past chapter 10 but I will try!