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Jade Smith finds herself unexpectedly transported into the world of a cliché-filled novel she once scoffed at. Trapped within the pages of "Twilight's Embrace," Jade must navigate the treacherous pitfalls of being a cannon fodder character.
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It's very well written. The main reason this is a 4 instead of a 5 is based around the odd turn about halfway through. The character starts out getting interesting abilities and a system, but those end up falling completely out of use except in occasional mention, leaving them primarily cosmetic. Rather, the story mostly revolves around a relationship drama with subterfuge and manipulation. Of course, with that turn, the system fails to provide any meaningful skills in information gathering, stealth, or anything related to the plot.
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Hello! This is my newest book; I hope you will like it. To support me, please send powerstones and help spread the word about the story. What are my thoughts on the book? In my opinion did a decent job, but ultimately, the final say is up to you. I hope you will like the book. with just 50 powers stone you get 1 more new chapter and for 10 golden ticket also 1 new chapter.
Wow c'est génial merci beaucoup pour votre dur travail mais si possible j'aimerais demander si il y aurais d'autre endroit où en peu lire vos histoires il m'est difficile de payer de plus il semble que portable est aussi quelques disfonctionnement
In many stories there is thing where people are either real and well written or have extreme and exaggerated personalities This is not either they are very close to being real so close that the film of unreality is ever so more apparent there are thing way people react that are just wrong sure it’s pretty good beside that but the reaction to certain thing in such a way and the lack of reaction to other things is such a major turn off for me that I wasted time writing this whole review The reactions bother me so much
The characters' dynamics are amazing. The books story is very attention-grabbing. You can tell the author of the book put a lot of heart into the story. Amazing!
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Parei no capítulo 17 e nossa eu tentei... mas vou parar por aqui, a mc é tipo uma cachorrinha pra vilã fazendo tudo que ela quer com um sorriso no rosto igual uma idiota e ela tem a mente de 20 anos!, e no primeiro dia que ela levou a vilã pra casa pra estudar a mãe parece gostar tanto da vilã mais que a mc e ainda faz a mc de serva mesmo a vilã falando daquele jeito super arrogante!!!, desse ponto pra frente a mãe tratou a mc como se ela devesse fazendo tudo pra vilã e se ela tenta recusar a mãe olha pra ela com um olhar aterrorizante... é sério eu tentei até a parte que a faz a mc com 5 anos luta contra um grande inimigo e desmaiar por 5 dias eu acho e ela acorda a mãe falar que tava preocupada e tudo pra no final ela fala pra mc levantar e jantar pq Reven a vilã não pode ficar sozinha na escola pra não se sentir na solidão kkkkk, e a mc reclama e ela olha com aquele olhar aterrorizante e diz que coisas como se ela não pudesse recusar
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