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Jessica was just your average female athlete, devoted to her sport. So devoted, actually, that her grades were plummeting. After a stern lecture from her into to biology teacher, Mr. McDougall, she decided to turn her act around. But on her way out she noticed a strange boy. She couldn’t stop thinking about him. Little did she know that she was the only one who could save his world...
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This feels like it's written by a much older woman who's experienced a lot instead of a teenager. Great imagination and writing style! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Maxien Roso is so creative and knows how to grab the reader's attention. We're going to see a lot of great books coming from her in the years to come!
This makes me feel like a fly on the wall - like I'm right there. This would make a great movie that people would pay money to see and most teenagers could relate to and we seniors could "remember when".
I love the development of the story and characters. This author is maturing with each new chapter. She is creating apiece of work that makes me look forward to the next chapter. Great job!!
This is the start of a great story. We need a little more background on the characters and a little more info on the visited world to make us really connect to the characters.
Read this compelling short story! The author uses descriptive language that truly paints a picture in your mind. I’m anxious for her next work to be published!
This book is by someone close to me and I hope you enjoy it!!!