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You have heard of the Targaryens with their Dragons, you have heard of the Valeryons with their ships and wealth, but what about the third Valyrian House, House Celtigar? They lack the lustrous qualities of the remaining Valyrians, and they don't possess formidable dragons or an armada that could easily conquer any shoreline. Additionally, they're not considered the wealthiest of the noble houses, leaving them in the realm of mediocrity. Their status is so humble that even the other two ancient houses do not consider them worthy enough to represent the prestigious name of Old Valyria.
However, amidst this seeming insignificance, a man reincarnated among them with a simple, yet grand vision - to elevate House Celtigar to new heights and earn the respect of the other great houses.
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First story, go easy on me, and might be slow updates. I'm not an economist, architect, or a war strategist in anyway, so maybe there's some mistakes here and there.
I use ChatGPT to fix the grammar and to make the dialog more 'suitable' for the times, so maybe there's some mistakes or cringey phrases.
all stuff except oc are not mine.
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Great story unique start environment compared to a lot of other fics. Also bother more with realistic happening such as building projects taking a lot of time and such. Great story overall for a story with currently only 5 chapters!
Interesting Premise and Interesting Time. Hope to read more of this unique celtigar centric fanfic.
Хорошая история интересный сюжет надеюсь история будет хорошо развиваться мне понравился . .
One of the best GOT fanfic, I got no issues. so keep it up Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler
amazing grammar and more realistic storytelling compared to most other GOT fic [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
This is a good story. I hope mc will get cannibal as his dragon. ............... ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... ............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... ............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ................... .............. ...................
This the one of the best fan fic I've ever read but the problem is the updates can you make 2 chapters a day thank you
Simply incredible. Keep up the good work author!!!! GOT is amazing.🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀
Finally some good realistic fanfic where the mc doesn ´t just get OP for no reason and where he auto get dragon. This is prove that you can write a fanfic with realistic mc and it will be 100 times better.
It is a very promising story with perfect writing quality, a realistically created MC that doesn't want to invent random high tech stuff just to uplift Planetos . I just hope it won't be a short story.
Really nice story, think it lacks a bit in character development though because there has been alot of time-skips but other than that i really like it
Ótima fanfic. Espero que vc não a abandone, seria interessante após o bebê nascer, que ele consiga domar Vermithor . Espero que venha uma menina
Honestly, haven't read such fine literature in a while, the Grammar, the plot, the way characters speak, "Father" instead of "Dad", perfection. You see this reviee, give it a read, because if you like bottom to top type stories, this a good go to. And if you like CK3 then this is kind of the same with building up your house and stuff.