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- I do not own the story or any characters, except for the main character.
- This story is primarily developed during my weekend holidays.
- I am writing this to enhance my writing skills, aiming to improve my overall storytelling. Feel free to provide comments if you notice any mistakes or issues.
-I haven't read the books, and have only a vague understanding of the book adaption and Canon version of Game of thrones, House of dragon and the whole history of the world.
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No synopsis = Instant 1 Star I’ll change this review once it gets a proper synopsis.
Mc is a pitiful being, without ambition or dreams, he is just a tool of the author to save the Targaryen house and there is no problem with him wanting to save his family,The problem is that beyond this goal he has nothing else, until chapter 30 we haven't seen any aspirations of his own. The plot of the story that even with the MC trying to change destiny remains the same. I don't understand why the author wants to write a dragon house fic if he doesn't even know the plot properly
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i did not watch the house of dragons. but the writer made it so that i can still enjoy this novel. the character development of the MC is very good, the story telling is also good. so will rate it at 4 stars
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Mc is only the king's servant, he doesn't have an ambition and the excuse is that he seeks peace for his family but still it doesn't change the story at all so far, the MC proposes the worst marriage candidates for his sister that would not stop the dance of the dragons
The story starts well and even makes you want to continue but then it becomes boring, the MC does not seem to have his own goals and only follows those of his family, it would be better if the MC had some character development but it is difficult to follow.
Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
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Es una buena fanfic con un buen mundo y buenos personajes que te dejan pensamientos profundo de momento de la historia que realmente no viste de la casa de los dragones
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MC is a Targaryen only in name. He's an overpowered version of Sir Criston Cole. An attack dog. At least Sir Cole bedded both Green and Black Queens.
we need more chapters asap also mc needs to start having a personality for himself
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so far i really enjoy this story there's nothing annoying me which is very good all the characters feel accurate to the lore so far i am very excited to see the rest of the story i really hope the author doesn't drop it
The MC is an attack dog, a tool that doesn't show any kind of ambition, whether it's a family, a castle or something, so it's a disposable tool