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Horizon before dawn

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A young man is thrust into the unforgiving world of Horizon Zero Dawn as an outcast. Will he survive, carving out a place for himself in this harsh, machine-filled wilderness? Or will he meet a grim fate, trampled by a Strider?

Follow Noir, our snarky and not-so-lucky protagonist, as he embarks on a wild and unpredictable journey. Along the way, you’ll meet the characters you love (and maybe hate), and witness how his presence changes the world as we know it.

What to Expect:
Slow-Burn Beginnings: The first chapters will focus on setting up Noir’s character and the challenges of his new reality.
Romance (Eventually): Expect romance much later in the story—when the time is right.
No Smut
No Harem
Action-Packed Adventure: Get ready for violence, explosions, and plenty of destruction.
Familiar Faces: Noir will meet Aloy and Rost early on, but not immediately. Their interactions will be pivotal.
A Complex Protagonist: Noir is a natural leader who won’t shy away from doing what needs to be done to save this dying world. He’s not a hero, nor a villain, a neutral karma protagonist walking a morally gray path.
This is my first fanfic, so please bear with me! I’d love to hear your thoughts on what works, what doesn’t, and how I can improve. If you spot any grammar issues, feel free to call them out.

Your feedback is everything to me. Whether you like it, dislike it, or feel compelled to throw some stones my way, it all helps me grow as a writer.

Thanks for taking the time to read this. If you’re kind enough to leave a review, I’ll light an incense stick in your honor (because that’s all I can afford).

Love you all.

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MARLENE_ANGEL

AUTHOR LOVE THIS NOVLE PLOT ABOUT MACHINE JUSES IN CRAZY WORLD,,,AUTHOR THIS HAS POTENTIAL..WILL THE MC BUILD A TECHNOLOGY EMPIRE AND OTHER WORLD ANIME AND GAME TECHNOLOGY...WILL MC GET TECHNOLOGY SYSTEM..HE GET TECHNOLOGY FROM OTHER WORLDS.

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FUTANARI_Phantom

AUTHOR DO NTO WASTE THIS NOVEL PLOT CENTER THIS NOVEL AROUND TECHNOLOGY LIKE MC CREATED WARHAMMER ARMOR AND GIANT MECHA LIKE TITANFALL AND AIRSHIPS...THE MC NEED TO CREATED AI AND FACTORIES..ALL HAIL THE MACHINE GOD.

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Joao_Matias_5451

what a Shameless "author" giving 5 stars to the very first thing he wrote. this guy is realy Shameless.

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Tragrillas

The only thing that up until now I can complain about is perhaps the names of some things being wrong like for example sylens is named sylas in chapter 3. But overall these thing are easy to overlook. Good job so far Author. Only recommandation I would give is to double check the specific names of places and characters.

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OneManTeam4321

This is a lot easier to read with the parentheses now in the story cant wait to continue reading.

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Sage_Honos

1 star for writing quality because its an AI story. MTL are better than AI. at least they have personality in their writing unlike AI which is plain dull and same thing over and over again

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Peter_Pan_7551

OC are interesting, the bigger world is amazing. you could use some edit on some chapters, but overall very good fic. add and enjoy the trip.

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DaoistCHCrZt

A very good story, it was about time we got a good Horizon fic, the Characters are well made and world is beautiful. Some names are wrong and you could use some help in the grammar, but i love it. thank you.

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Overseer123

love this and about time someone made a horizon story. and if any writers can do a horizon story but with the system from "being the farm to live in another world" but maybe nerfed a little would also me cook.

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Reyser_Zaeta

a solid start and a common sense MC, that alone adds up to a lot of points. I'm still hoping it's not a harem, that said I hope to see the rise of the Nora King.

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Andrew_Kroupa

Book is already dead….Book is already dead….

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Worn_out_by

The author doesn’t understand the timeline much, Aloy went from 10 years younger than the MC to 6 years younger. The writing progressivly gets worse and tanks at like ch 30. The characters read fake and robotic constantly repeating the same things

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Dark_light

I've honestly been look for a story set around horizon zero dawn and this is the best one I've found so far, thanks for your hard work Author.

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trytwisted

didn't enjoy the MC at all. First hzd fic I've read and was hoping for something more serious. not a bad story just not what I like . MC doesn't feel grounded in the world as if he is in sao but in hzd instead. all so found all his joking extremely boring and annoying just jokes no character expect to conquer the world or another bad joke.

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Loki_Deimonblood

Es la única historia de horizon que visto que tiene más de 4 capítulos y es una obra maestra me encanta gracias por escribir esta hermosa obra

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