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Meet Daniele Berti, a reincarnated person,At least he learned that when he turned 5
But unfortunately the world he is in is more dangerous than he thinks.
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O protagonista e homen ? só para saber vou continuar lendo e interessante eu pensei que era a armadura de leão de Sant Seiya ninguém faz com coisas de cdz Sant Seiya tem um sistema de poder legal e completo e armaduras mais legals dos animes 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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good story but too many spaces make it lazy to read[img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad]
Subarashi don’t drop it author ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥 . . . . .………. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Uma das fics que eu mais curti de dxd,só espero que o autor não abandone ela,pq ela é muito divertida tanto pelo fato do MC estar com a igreja ao invez dos demônios oq é o plot que quase todo mundo usa e ainda mais ele ter o régulos ao invez do Ddraig que tá saturado demais
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This story has an excellent plot, and the protagonist mostly has a calm and mature personality, though he occasionally provides comic relief, which blends well with the narrative. The writing is solid, with scenes flowing naturally and a good pacing. The side characters don't feel flat or one-dimensional; they have distinct characteristics that make them feel real and alive. The story is told from the POV of the church and heaven, which is rare since devils are the protagonists in DXD, making it refreshing and unique compared to most other fanfictions. The author's writing is quite good, but it's clear that English is not his first language, as there are many sentence structure errors, that's something needs to be improved. Overall, this is a good fanfiction and highly recommended.
can u pls fix the chapters spacing it is really disturbing and annoying for me overall nice story but plss the spacing fix it
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😃I like it a lot😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
the writing and grammar kinda suck but overall the story is pretty good[img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries]
A wonderful and enjoyable story, but why do I feel it is a bit shounen, but enjoyable? The hero is good, although because of the abundance of darkness in the world, I find it imaginary.
I give 5 stars to the author's potential, the first chapters can be tedious, errors in capitalizing names, unrealistically frequent transitions of points of view and flashbacks, which greatly disrupts the pace. These are the downsides that were there, but overall the story is interesting and presented from an unusual angle. Over time, the quality improves, this is felt somewhere from chapter 15. In general, we'll see what happens next, but so far the progress is respectable.
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I certainly like Sairaorg, but I'm glad that the lion's Longinus fell into the hands of a person in your fanfic. While you are doing a wonderful job, I read everything in a hurry. The decision to distance GG from the canon so as not to make another retelling of anime or light novel is simply gorgeous. very high quality fanfiction.