/ Anime & Comics / High School DXD : BORN OF SIN
摘要
A soul was sent to the world of the DXD by an entity to live there.
But he was also given a SACRED GEAR which empowers him with the abilities of Sins from 7 Deadly Sins.
Watch him on his journey in DXD as he fights with supernatural, and makes a harem.
Not Rias hater.
A MC which kills, not like a madman.
And not a simp.
If people agree then maybe I will give a Fate crossover, only characters not whole novel.
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You failed at the same thing as everyone in this place, you made your character absurdly powerful by stealing controlled powers when he already had his own. the personality and interactions need polishing as well, but that's ok (considering you're not a writer)
Well author here. This will be a dxd fic where girls won't blindly fall for mc. mc won't be part of any peerage, and won't be a devil. Why? See for your self. I write this purely as a hobby. And if sometimes updates are delayed then know that i am busy with coaching and stuff. Hope you guys show your support.
If you want an absurdly powerful protagonist who does whatever he wants and his harem that behaves like ordinary girls, this is your fanfic[img=faceslap]
It's either a traduction or English is not the author first language, you can read it but it is not really enjoyable having to correct the grammar in your mind
Although I like the story, the grammar and writing style males it a bit stressful to read. I love the stability of the updates and story development. As for character design, the only issue I have is that you made most if not all his powers Sacred gears, which in my opinion, are overrated. I mean, you could have just made them like Tensura Unique skills or something. I love the DxD franchise, only thing I don't like is how that world is full of perverts.
Very good story I hope you don't abandon it and that you continue like this I would also like daily updates if you can and that you add an auxiliary chapter with the name and image of Appearance of the mc
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-mc is not a simp.Ooooh. I would check this out.Because I am very close to change my name again.P. S. Truthfully speaking, yuri in harems puts mostly simps. Trying to be "mature and understanding", making fair for everyone.Beach, we are not here to create communism all over again. And it's definitely not what harem should be about.