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Hidden World.

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作者: kaio_eduardo

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I transmigrated to the crazy vampire boss from the game I was playing.

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Sinclairvic

Lol It's cool, the characters and the world need to be better addressed, but the story isn't bad. I think that when there are more chapters it will improve these points more.

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GABISAMA

It's not amazing; it has its flaws but also potential. I like the theme of vampires and supernatural creatures, although there aren't many stories in this theme that I enjoy. I'll give it a chance, even though the writing is a bit weak. I hope the updates are at least regular. The point-of-view issue bothers me a little, but I don't think it's a big problem.

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