摘要
A story of an ordinary youth Named Ned who got transmigrated -with a cheat power named The Origin Space- into a new world that he knows nothing about. He would explore this new world using the many abilities he will gain from the space and conquer regions no man ever stepped into before, and one day he will be hailed by all as "the Hero of The World". The journy of Ned will be filled with fights, from small time bandit groups, up until natural disaster level mythical beasts and godlike evil beings.
Tags: Harem - Game elements - Fantasy world
[[[ A/N: This is my first time writing a story, and i'm writing in English even tho it isn't my first language, however iam quite good at it and there will be no unreadable content, at worst just some typos. But still take it easy on me :)
This story is original, one i had thought of, and it will have multiple love interests around 3 and all original, and the MC will be overpowered at one point, it's just that he would still work hard to get strong.
If you like, or find something wrong in the story please tell me.
Above all : enjoy reading :)
^cover photo not mine^
I will do my own cover photo though, probably once i write about 30~40 chapters. Or if the novel gets popular enough, then much earlier. ]]]
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There are few grammar errors, and it needs to be proofreaded. Other than that, it has a amazing plotline, and keep up with the good work!!😄😄
Could have used some sex scenes What happened to girls in the prologue? Seemed like Ned was about to have fun until he got the powers and sh*t... pretty dissapointed!
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Great story with good world building... I was astonish that there's a lot of people reading it, but didn't comment about the chapter... Anyway, you have a great story, so do keep up since even when there's no one commenting your chapter, there's still a lot of people reading it!!! Go go go!!!
This is part of a review swap and at the time of reading, there are 24 chapters. However, writing this now as I already have a general gist of the novel. Writing Quality: English isn't my first language, so any minor grammatical errors aren't noticeable to me. As long as the reading is smooth, I am happy. This is smooth enough for me. :) Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development/Character Design/World Background: The story itself is different from what I initially expected from the synopsis, so would advise the Author to change it a bit. This is more game-based like Night Ranger style, though it's not that he goes into a game. So that is what makes it different and unique for me. I've always like this sort of style, so it's a plus for me. The way it develops and progresses is also well done. It's interesting and I'm sure it'll only get better as more chapters come out (with the magic and fighting stuff, that is). All the best, Author!
I like these types of fantasy novels since it gives one an escape from their mundane life and so I enjoyed reading the few chapters you have on here. The story pace seems idyllic enough for the training arc. Can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work, Author!
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For some weird reason, this is more game based than other novels I've read. I'm digging the style though. Reminds me of Shield Hero. Keep it up!
Building chapter by chapter. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more.
................................................................................................. Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I don't feel like giving my own novel a review is shameless, otherwise the option wouldn't be there in the first place. Still giving myself 5 starts is shameless haha. Please enjoy the story, and although i'm sure there are many mistakes, i'm doing my best to make the novel enjoyable. But in the end this story is but my starting one and with time i would get better and better. Maybe my next one would be a fanfiction :)
Amazing. It is good story with good English. It have potential to be great story. I like Ned so far since he have good chance got various women and magic in world. I hoping that he got badass bloodline later in story