摘要
Marcus just used to be a regular old university student but after dying an unfortunate death he now finds himself at the whims of a delusional god.
As punishment for his sins (Leaving a 3-star review on a god's novel), Marcus is transported into that novel as Lucius, a crazy rebel leader that wants to destroy society and rebuild it as he sees fit.
If that was the end of things then it wouldn't be so bad, but apart from all that Lucius is tasked with the job of capturing the hearts f all the heroines or he will suffer painful and gruesome death!
With his back against the wall and life on the line, Lucius must get to work.
[Ding! Heroine capture system online!]
[Steal a kiss from the heroine’s lips- 500LP]
[Ask the heroine if you can cop a feel- 700 LP]
[ Spend a hot and steamy night with the heroine- 5000LP]
It's not that he wanted to do it, it's just that his life was at stake!
He really did not want to NTR the protagonist!
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寫檢討truly a specimen so many ntr novels and no food quality ntr white knights until now congratulations on this keep it up
the story world character system all are interesting and good written sadly the update scheduled is slow if that gets fixed It can become a top novel on here
World building - Not bad. It's the normal nobles dominate the society and commoners suffer type of plot. Demon lord is already defeated and the Nobles don't have enemies except for the defeated Revolutionary forces. ..Grammar- Author doesn't edit chapters. So there's a lot of mistakes, but can read. Not the type of mistakes that makes you wonder if you're reading latin. MC- Personality is good. Better than most edge lords that instantly decide to go genocidal maniac or rapist. But he's too weak, so he is slowly getting stronger. System - Doesn't help the MC to improve his combat abilities. But helps him in seducing the heroines. However, .Chapter 41 - no talents yet. weakest student in the academy.Chapter 68 - MC is humiliated for being weak, he fought back. He got fined and punished by the academy board. Chapter 78 - MC is ostracised in the academy due to rumours spread from his enemies and does not do anything about it. Chapter 96 - Finally gains a couple of decent talents. Chap 102 - Got beaten black n blue by the opponent........The novel was good but the problem is MC is too much nerfed. This is a villain type plot but MC is abysmally weak. I like the fact that he doesn't act like a maniac who does anything for power, but his powerlessness irks me (Personal opinion). Normally villains should try to have a good reputation in the academy right? This is basically a protagonist plot but MC doesn't have the luck with women and is a 'villain'.
揭示劇透MC is the villain, are you sure? Why is the MC so weak? Although there is a support system in place.😅😅😅 MC is the villain, are you sure? Why is the MC so weak? Although there is a support system in place😅😅😅
The mc is frustratingly weak. he is supposed to be a villain but does nothing that a villain would do, he sticks to the ntring for like 2 chapters every 20 chapters. he keeps getting humiliated one way or another, usually you'd expect the villain to be cool and be in positions of power. mc is kind of lackluster. If the Mc can be made more sinister (which i dont see happening, character development doesn't feel like its going to go in that direction soon) it would make this novel better. it isnt too bad but i just hate pathetic mcs which is what this mc is leaning towards
simply,it's a masterpiece .it can make a reader want to read other chapter after another without knowing how time has passed so fast.
it starts out pretty average but does eventually developed into something better, so not bad author keep at it.
This is a very good Novel. i like it very much but Unfortunately the author stopped writing more. it has been 6 months since he uploaded any Chapters. Author, can you Upload more please?
a novel that has a lot of potential, I loved it so far, please don't abandon it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I have high hopes from your Nobel. I want you to keep writing like this.Please don't ruin the life of new protagonist for Novel's old protagonist (OGMC)who is your own creation and your own character.I hope all the heroines are still virgins.hope till now they have no relation with the original main character of Novel, cuz that will be NTR to our mc ( at least I will consider it like that) . I'll keep reading this, it's really engaging storyline. thank you🤣