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"I might look drunk, Your Highness," she gulped. "But I'm not. This is my first and last warning to you. If you don't stay away from me, I will surely destroy you and your people."
"Are you sure?" His gray eye interlocked into hers.
Hazel rolled her eyes and held the hem of her dress so that she wouldn't trip. She could barely see now, especially with the aid of that terrible headache raking her skull. However, just a slight error and she wobbled all over him.
His grip was held tightly to her waist but she pushed him away from her as she said, "Husband, you mistake lust for love. This is a warning, you will regret this."
"Wife, there is a lot you need to learn from me. Like knowing how to tell a lie. Nevertheless, I shall give you another two weeks to take an act of revenge on me, if you don't succeed, I won't hesitate to make you mine even against your wish. If you do succeed, I am happy to die in your hands."
He continued, whispering along her earlobe since he knew she would be unaware of what they had discussed the next morning, "It is like killing two birds with a stone, I will be able to fulfill my promise about keeping you away from evils. You would be able to protect yourself against me." As he said those words, he clenched his jaw. "It's funny how I am the evil you need to hide from, the one who has and will hurt you the most."
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HAZEL COLESHILL, a 22-year-old vampiress who had a very terrifying past with a werewolf, pledged to protect her clan by sacrificing herself to the werewolves as part of a truce.
However, already having an idea of who she was going to battle with, an alpha prince, who is rumoured to be a psychopathic monster, she is pledged on destroying him completely before he does.
In short, she would make him obsessed with her and then finally destroy everything that he holds dear.
LUCIFEL, a psycho-born alpha prince, was caged as a child by his father to undergo therapy and experiments. He doesn't believe he is insane, thereby figuring out weaknesses in those that treat him and feigning progress to shorten treatment was his best escape.
He came across a rude vampiress prisoner and is determined to make life hell for her by making her his pet not until things change and he figures out that he is obsessed with her.
Who would believe that just one night of hot sex with that gorgeous thing was enough to change his personality from a cold being to a being who wants nothing but her?
He could swear that she definitely bewitched him!
But will his obsession turn into something else?
However, why does this vampiress look like someone who he promised to protect in the past?
The war between the werewolves and vampires seems to be neverending, will these two people end the war between the two creatures, or create a tougher war?
EXCERPT 2
"How does it happen?"
"Possessing your shadow in the walls is really helpful. Shadows are meant to be the most vigorous reflections. They attack your enemy if you can control them and then hide back in the walls. They break walls and are extremely powerful."
Hazel sighed softly before she said, "Let's go back to the last one. Possessing beings just by staring at them in the eyes."
"Have you heard about the rule majorly known among humans?"
"What rule?"
"The rule about," she raised her two index fingers up and then curled them, signaling a quote. "The rule about not looking into a vampire's eyes?"
Hazel shook her head.
"The rule about vampires possessing humans when the humans stare at them is as old as the mountains, however, it can also be said to be a superstition but it is not a superstition for some special ones among us." Fannie looked at Hazel intently before saying, "Someone like you, Lady Coleshill. You have the ability to possess beings just by staring at them
Warning: Mature Content, Sexual Content and Heavy Fantasy.
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What am I even supposed to criticize on this book? Sigh, just 3 chapters in and I'm hooked. Starting from the good writing quality to amazing premise and interesting characters, the numbers of things needed to criticize are completely depleted. Although for some barely discovered errors, the writing quality of the author remains above average. The characters were well fleshed out, and very nice. Welp, the book is a rare gem and I'm a bit stunned. I have high hopes for this and hope the author keeps up the good work.
Author's Review here! (Author is shyಥ‿ಥ) Hellbound With The Cold Alpha is participating in a contest, I hope you can all support it with every bit of your power. What to expect? Of course, it is a fantasy book that includes vampires, werewolves, witches, dragons, and ones yet to come. There is no historical book without ballgowns or martial arts, you will see a lot of it here. Most especially the plot is immersed with mystery, secrets, superpowers/strength, politics, and so on. I hope you are ready to be immersed in the world I have created. The beginning chapters may seem a bit shady, but it gets better, I promise. And warning; This is not a light book, the world isn't light either way, so enjoy.
This is just the beginning and it looks like we are in the middle of the book where it gets so intense. I wonder how this author is able to rock the FL book this well while making a non-cliche idea this intriguing. This is a brilliant work and it calls for excellency in the nearest future. Keep it up, author.
Hi there lovely! I'm not usually into romance novels but the synopsis of your book is great and eye-catching, it can definitely grab the attention of readers. While reading, I noticed that there are some words that were misused in the paragraphs. And honetly, I was a bit confused, maybe because I find your sentences to be sounding a bit weird? Especially when I was reading them out loud. But, that can be fixed though so it's not much. Aside from that, your story has great potential and I really hope that the FL will come out strong in your story. 😊😊😊 Well that's all, keep writing! Fighting dear Author.
As scary as Lucifel is, I think our FL is an equal amount of crazy.🤪 Read one to three and told myself to stop, but I just can't. It's worth my time ,so why should I? 🤷
Your story is really really good. So far I have read. No novel made me this much curious then yours. Although I have also took a part in carnival contest. But yours is the best one. Because the plot and story is new, intriguing. And the most I am curious is how it turn out between ML and FL. I will read it till the end. Good Luck for the contest!
This is a book with a lot of potential. I rarely praise books but when I do, it's well deserved. This is well written, almost zero grammatical errors and a few spelling errors which can easily be overlooked. Pacing is great, not too fast nor too slow, and the story development makes you yearn for more information. That alone is a quality a good book should have. Would I recommend? Oh, yes I will. You are doing a good job author. Keep it up.👍
Not a fan of vampire and werewolf novel but seriously,I love this book and will recommend it to all readers, The characters are easily recognize. Keep it up🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
The story is something so new to me....... I like it...... The characters are intriguing. Recommended to fantasy lovers!!! Great job author!
Soo interesting. It really catches your attention. The description of the scenes, the dialogues, the emotions, all of them are fabulous. I loved reading it. Well done! Author I hope you keep it up.
I'm seriously obsessed with this book. once again blood doctor had surprised me. nice one dear ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
This book is really interesting and the characters are also amazing. I'll read the book once it goes up to 100 chapter, so keep up the good work author :)
This book is one of the most interesting book ever. Just seven chapters and I am stuck in. The first chapters, talked about the pain of our weak female lead. She is not that weak but she is termed weak by others because she is a vampiress and doesn't want to drink blood knowing that the humans are the ones getting killed because of them. I love the way the author's brought in the past and the present together, it makes me so excited. Sometimes, I just couldn't hold my breath because of the diolgues. This book keeps me off my worries! It's not about the typical human lead and werewolf, it is about the vampiress lead and the werewolf. This is just the beginning and I am just so interested! I love the ML's names Lucifel. The FL and the ML will make good couples. Well, about Ethan, I feel Ethan needs someone to keep him down from his unnecessary harshness. He needs a mate, I want him to have one and stop disturbing our poor Hazel. About Micah... I love Micah too but Sometimes he doesn't have the calmness but still he is loving and I need him to stay with Hazel till!