摘要
The Heavens rejection of Earth - the seperation of Mortals and Immortals, the path to power destroyed.... This is the retaliation of the Heavens!
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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hiiiiii! Author Aileus here, I'm a bit insane so please put up with me 😝 I'm open to any suggestions that anyone has to offer - I'll take all critical feedback and try to improve my work! This includes going over chapters already posted an revising them, at the moment I don't have anyone helping me edit so it's just me I guess! (Gotta put all 5 stars cuz I'm biased af haha)
Be careful that you don't anger the heavenly Dao and get struck by thunder. Anyway this synopsis looks interesting, I will read and give the appropriate star at chapter 20 to be fair.