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Harry Potter Veela's Embrace

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作者: ScarlettRose00

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During the second task of the Triwizard Tournament, Harry helps Fleur and in return pays the ultimate price of getting bonded to a Veela.

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Storm20074

I'm usually not into books like this one. However, this is really good writing. Keep it up, author.

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NutAllinMyBut

Good start, changing povs between mc and heroine is a nice touch as it builds character well. Nearly perfect grammar and smooth dialogue makes it easy to read and become interested in the story. Keep up the good work author.

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