/ Book&Literature / Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
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A Drunken conversation between the heads of the Marvel-verse lead to a decision to save the life of a MCU version of Harry Potter destined by the fates to die. How? By giving him the powers of a video game character. Currently at 650K+ words
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It's simply fantastic. Everything is fresh and interesting, the gamer style and how it works in the setting are really well done and make sense, the different worlds also blend together naturally and don't feel stitched together like some stories. I'm always keen for the next chapter, and each one leaves me begging for more. When Harry become a bit too OP the nerfing is well done too, it makes sense story wise and doesn't feel like a cop out, just a new training tier with harder difficulty because of the circumstances. Overall 5/5 for everything, truly cream of the cream of the crop of fanfic ( With the crop being typical trash that somehow get 4 star rankings and cream of the crop being actually decent not eye cancer, this is a tier beyond and not only good but continually good)
Great start with an extensive prologue and good setting, but mediocre continuation at best. I liked how his powers were explained and how the author meshed everything together, but apart from that, I'm a bit disappointed. I wanted to write a longer review, but I accidentaly closed the window and I won't bother rewriting it. Basically, if you are looking for an OP MC, you are not looking for this fanfiction. Fast paced start and quite AU, with HP world mattering little. Neither should you read this if you are looking for a nice gamer fic with level ups and all, since this is not part of this fic. There is plenty that I liked, but even more that I disliked. From characters to the way the author writes to the world s/he wrote. The magic system is pretty neat, though I have no idea whether this is just using the marvel comics system or not. Over-all, the author is articulate and the text is of good quality, but there a plenty of points that go ignored in favour of unnecessary or boring parts. Oh, and this is not a Harry Potter fanfiction. This is a marvel fanfiction with the wizarding world being pretty much unimportant after the stretched prologue.
10/10 Would read again So this fanfic is very good, to be honest was hoping for the HarryxHermione cause they spent a lot of time together in volume 1, but Harry only spent one year, learned everything in hogwarts and didnt come back, and at 11 he wasn’t looking for a girlfriend, so they only keep being friends and talking with mail... He goes to become a sorcerer under the Ancient One, meets The Doctor, Amy and Rory (awesome mini arc) then goes to the Academy of Charles Xavier were obviously meets Jean, and wants to help her to unseal the Phoenix So go and Read it, wont be a waste of time, Literally Watched the whole 41 chapters in 2 days cant wait for more... but I’m still waiting for Harry to meet Tony Stark (as both are geniuses), gets a sample of Captain America blood,Spiderman spiders, and Oscorp Serum (and thus Connor’s Serum) to recreate the Super Soldier Serum...
I've been reading this on FF since it started and I'm glad it's also here on webnovel for others to enjoy this good story. Keep up the great work!
My writing style generally involved me writing myself into a corner and then trying to figure out how I'm going to get out of it. So don't expect to be able to predict what will happen next because before I've written the end, even I have no idea how I'm going to get out of it. I have specific things I want to do with the story and pretty much the whole story is just those scenes and the filler between. You can tell this from the Hogwarts Arc where I skipped most of the boring parts and went straight to the fun parts. Because of this, I'd say the story moves at a good pace.
10/10. Great novel. 10/10. Great novel.10/10. Great novel.10/10. Great novel.10/10. Great novel.10/10. Great novel. 10/10.10/10. Great novel. Great novel.
It is good and i enjoyed reading the story but the harey potter arc ticked me off a but. Don’t get me wrong i lived how inventive he was during the tasks of the goblet of fire. BUT the overusage of muggle tech just left a bad taste in my mouth. Apparently he read the whole hogwarts, potter, black and dumbledores personal library. So he knows some really powerful, obscure and rare magic. So why the **** does he not use any of it ??? Instead he uses some runes to adapt muggle tech like a submarine, some drones and a magical gun. In his big show down with Voldemort he doesnt even use magic, he uses a magical gun and goose eats voldemort. It might as well bit even have been the potterverse. All that seriously powerful magic he knows and he doesnt touch it, going as far as to hide his power even when he is more powerful than 99% of the wizards in britain. Just frustrated me.
I saw in 1 of your comments that you are the original author. If that's true I really like your work, especially those two chapters with the Doctor. That scene felt really authentic, plus the story as a whole has a lot of different/original ideas.
Written at chapter 115. This story is pretty good, a good mix of marvel and harry potter. A bit on the crack side but still good. The story definitely starts to drop in quality in latter chapters and this is mainly due to adding the onmiverse to early in my opinion. The author should fix a few major problems which are. 1. jumping from one thing to other (I.e going from the wizarding world to study as a sorcerer.) 2. not showing harry very working on anything but just showing new tools and weapons. 3. not making it fairly clear if a character is dead or not. 4. not really showing harry interacting with other characters.
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Great story, 10/10. Little Harry is a little devil... full of sarcasm and naughtiness. I love how his fathers influence rubbed off of him hahahaha. All in all, great book. I recommend every person who enjoys HP fan fiction to read this. Even though the story rushes through the plot... it is very well written and it just doesnt feel that way. The marvel stuff is a lot wider in scope and it sounds promising from what I've read till now. Good luck author, best wishes. *sips tea*
One of the best novels I've ever read so far, so please don't drop the this work don't take too long for upload some chapters 📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖
long chapters high speed releases good background and more i like it a lot..................................................................
Great novel.10/10.It is good and i enjoyed reading the story but the harry potter arc ticked me off a but. Don’t get me wrong I lived how inventive he was during the tasks of the goblet of fire. BUT the over usage of muggle tech just left a bad taste in my mouth. Apparently he read the whole Hogwarts, potter, black and Dumbledore's personal library. So he knows some really powerful, obscure and rare magic.
I need more man i need more it so good i am addicted man cmon i need my daily dose man cmon
Amazing story. Devoured all the (until now) 43 chapters in 4 days. Kinda mind nogging in the beggining since it is not canon HP timeline, but the author explain everything and does not assume that the reader knows everything about Marvel and HP (just the very basics).
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yo, I've been reading this for a while and from most of the novels I've read, this is one of the best ones around. I just hope that you are not dropping this or if you are to at least give a heads up. Hope everything good with you 🙏
10/10 great World build , great character build, And great story build up, and all round original in its idea. I love the story and would recommend it to others.