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Hadrian Peverell, once known as Harry Potter, is far more than just the Boy Who Lived. When his demonic powers awaken after Voldemort's failed curse, his life is forever changed. Taken in by his uncle Dante, the legendary devil hunter, Hadrian grows up learning to harness his Sparda bloodline while uncovering the secrets of his forgotten heritage.
But his journey takes a dramatic turn when he discovers he is the true heir of the ancient Peverell family—a legacy that unites the Potters, Blacks, and Slytherins under one powerful name. With the Peverell Lordship comes unimaginable wealth, responsibility, and enemies who will stop at nothing to control him.
Now, caught between the worlds of magic and demons, Hadrian must fight to claim his birthright, confront dark forces from both realms, and forge a new path as Lord Peverell, armed with the skills of a devil hunter and the magic of his ancestors.
This is my first original work.
Disclaimer:
This is a work of fan fiction. All characters, settings, and concepts from Harry Potter, Devil May Cry, High School DxD, and Fate are the property of their respective creators and rights holders. I do not claim ownership of these elements. This story is created for entertainment purposes only, and no profit is being made. Original characters, plot points, and interpretations are my own.
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the beginning was not bad, you could tell there was AI but it wasn't that bad. However, I feel like it got worse in the Daphne chs. ait might have been the same but I took a break and came back, and it felt worse.
This is really interesting and fun, but the bolds on the words take away from the experience. Your eye keeps jumping from one bold to another while kinda omitting everything in between. That is about the only issue I have otherwise this is great!
A história é boa e bem estrutura, o crossover também está se desenvolvendo muito bem. Só estou esperando uma versão do Harry puxando uma pitola no meio da batalha de Hogwarts.
La premisa de la historia es muy buena, su ejecución magistral hay potencial de muy buenas tramas en esta historia, uno de los problemas que tenía con las historia de solucionó con la reescritura así que, me gusta bastante.
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I feel this is genarated by AI with the spacing like “confrontation with Sirius black” It just does not feel natural transition to what is about to happen. Also the one paragraph about each character and how they raised Harry. It just feels a tell not show. Then there is the bolding of all the speech which gets annoying, like cant you use quotation marks and then use bolding for spells? Also for the confrontation with Sirius apparently Dante never told Harry that he was his uncle and that his mothers name was lily, like at all. Then in chapter 3 it says “since Sirius arrived at devil may cry a year ago.” Like what Sirius can now travel dimensions?