/ Book&Literature / Harry Potter and the Dual Lord
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Arthur Holly fell asleep like any other day. And he woke up like any other day. Except that he didn't wake up in his own body, but in a three years old one.
Arthur transmigrated into what seemed to be the same world he previously lived in, except in the past, before he was even born.
But everything changed the day of his fourth birthday.
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At first it was light hearted and I thought it would be my sort of thing but he's getting more and more evil the more I read and now that the author has said hes not even evil but annoying after 40 chapters im thinking of dropping
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Until he leaves Hogwarts, the story was fantastic. After that it lost in everything except duckedupedness. There are a few completely unreadable chapters. So much potential wasted for a now, at best, bad story.
Really can't say much. since a novel should be reviewed within 30-50 chapters. Cause by then some characters is developed and the story background is decent enough to not confuse the reader. Grammar is good. Character development of MC is good. So is his teacher Merlin. Mother and Father and random lovable sister check. LOL So Far love the Novel. Keep it up, Please!
plot holes, dumb mc, bullshit logic, and it's just boring 💀💀👎👎👎👎👎🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🦧🦧🦧🦧👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎💀💀
The story is good story but it has to many plots and sub plots to focus on the mc himself. Some things seems random that was just put in and it just doesn't make sense at times. The mc was good at first but it went downhill when a new family member was added in and after howgarts.
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Esta es una de pocas historias realmente mala que dan ganas de no ver más me da asco sobre todo el Mc solo puedo decir una de las peores novelas que he leído
CONTINUE THE STORY PLEASE.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂🤣😂😂😂😂👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋👋🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Pretty much the main character is an emo and edgy Mary Sue. No character development at all and the world seems to bend to his will. So only read this story if you are into cardboard characters. Grammar is most fine just a few small mistakes from not checking.
So far, it seems to be a good story. Author has added a new world background with possible improvements to be able to build the story with more depth than just J.K. Rowling's stories.
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Mm pues no me gusta por donde va la historia pero en general la historia esta bien, tiene como todo su propio mundo de HP para explorar aunque no se creo que esperaba algo diferente a un MC loco pero bueno xd
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when i first started reading this i really enjoyed it. i loved the backstory except gods but that's just me . the story was amazing and then the mc leaves Hogwarts and bam **** goes weird. wtf??the story was progressing great up til then, i mean come on dude hes only 11 years old and what happen to protecting harry in the shadows or something. god complex please he'd get rekt by dumby. all hes a master at is mind powers. honestly your not to far yet and could redo from before he went bat **** crazy or at least wait til puberty
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So this is great piece of work until author decided to introduce and change MC 'aura'. Well after that chapter I have decided that I cant read anymore because he simply became arrogant kid with a God complex it was sad thing to see. Before he was cool type and I even admied his character but after change he simply became typical wuxia arrogant young master. While his power is simply above average. Authro made amazing world and game him epic quest it rly intrigued me at the start. Few plot twists and turns were interesting. So overal score is what you see. Quality would have been 5/5 if not MC change tho.
Terrible...another ridiculous mc that seems to get dumber as he gets stronger to make the story have *******...authors should stop making grindy stories if the grind does nothing and all u want is close epic battles that make no sense