/ Book&Literature / Harry's Multiversal Journey
摘要
What if Remus had been too slow? To save Sirius, Harry jumped into the Veil of Death after him. The Wizarding World's understanding of the Veil was far too shallow to grasp its true potential. But they had one thing right: the chances of survival beyond the Veil are almost non-existent, and the price is high. Another soul, possessing some powerful gifts, seized the opportunity and joined the ride.
Follow a changed Harry Potter on an adventure through the multiverse. Will he fulfill the prophecy? Can he even survive? Will he ever find a place where he belongs? Watch him face great evils and darkness.
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Honestly starts ok, then it becomes convoluted really quick, one world then another then another with no real progression to be seen. It would have been better had the author split everything up more
Really nice premise. Harry Potter always a nice Setup. Currently Daily Updates is also really good. Chapter Lengths is a bit above average in my Opinion. Quality is also one of the decent ones. Can't wait for more.
Sorry for my bad English, I'm using the translator. The story was good until it entered the world of FMA and the author's terrible choice to practically nerf the system and throw the MC into the world of Magus. Now for me this arc is very boring, but that's my opinion and I'm not trying to influence anyone's opinion. Now I'm waiting for this arc to end and hoping the next one will be better. With that, a good job to the author. . . .
everything was great until the author decided to add more and more other anime or books like I get it but still right now it's becoming a mess 😮💨 I miss the part where this was my favourite fanfic untill recent chapters
Nice Story so far, quality is good, i like its concept. Can't wait for more chapters to be uploaded and try to make chapters long, they are not too short but they are also not big.
Needs some Editing, lots of little mistakes like calling Legilimancy, Legitimacy or Obliviate, Oblivion but otherwise it's a pretty interesting Oc posses Harry gamer story
Nice Story so far can't wait to see where it goes! Quality is decent, a bit above the average Webnovel Fanfiction, but not the best I ever read. Please more soon!
3/2/3/5/4 After chapter 52, feels like the author got big bribes to do a 180 in the story. Suddenly, system is evil trope followed up with at least 30 chapters of warlock of the magus world shenanigans. Poorly done, since 30+ chaps in a singular world after such speed running of the other worlds he has access to is tedious to read about. Considering everything left behind in his supposed main world. So yeah, feels like author either got bribed or felt like the MC was too OP and decided to just cut it and run in a different direction. Personally I'm going to shove this fic into my 100-0 reading list and sleep on it for a few weeks and then check if MC ever goes back to GoT
Great novel. thank you! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💯💯👏👏👏👏💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💯💯👏👏👏👏💯👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Nice, setting. I really need more. Can't wait to see what happens next. I especially liked the foreshadowing in the first Chapter. Hopefully didn't I read to much into it.
Read up to chapter 55. Starts great, then author nerfs MC for no reason at all. Skipps a few chapters and ultimately, decided, its getting boring so I will be officially dropping this, or not, who knows, the next arc will be the turning point if I should drop or not
Last arc is unnecessary and ruined the continuity of the story. Nerfed the MC and of course, more than 30 boring chapters that don't contribute positively to the story. Since the author doesn't care about the readers, it's not a story for those who are following along. If you are going to read it, it is better to wait until it is finished, as the author does not take the reader's opinion into account and also does not respond to their comments. Either way, it's not for me. As it is, it has lost the essence of the beginning. And it seems like there will be no end of universes embedded in the story. I think the right thing to do would be to set a maximum of 5 or 6 universes that are very in tune with HP and GOT and work with that, developing the characters that are brought to GOT well. As it stands, it doesn't even make sense to develop a kingdom in GOT.
It started off good, but became alot better over time. alot of things aren't explained clearly, and power levels aren't easy to recognize. besides that, it's pretty good and I definitely want more... only HP fanfic where we have spent 0 time in the wizard world... but it's probably gonna happen soon, so with all the build up, I can only imagine it's gonna be satisfying
I greatly Enjoyed this story, and I wish there was so much more. It's a 4-star rating right now, but it wouldn't take much more for it to become a 5-star story. MC is powerful but not overpowered. Plot points for the future have me wanting more.
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I enjoyed it a lot and I have high hopes for the warlock of the magus world I haven’t seen it used in fanfics so it will be interesting to see it
The story is quite good so far but the last few chapters are too fast as there should be few incidents in each world then jumping to other
A Genocide / Mass Enslavement right at the start of the Story? Bold. I like it! I need to know more!