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A boy who obtains a mysterious peach, a heartwarming Ero Novel. The main character is a natural devil. One who doesn’t like attention.
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What I think this makes this book really good is no matter where you're on it's always good. The women are always acting super hot and when you read it it just is amazing
You better fucking be going past the original authors 6 chaps you are continuing the original novel right? I like the original but it completed only after six chaps I put my hopes in you to finish this also it only talked about ass and I want a little p ussy to in the novel to pls...
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Great story telling. This short story has long chapters that simply fly by making you wish for more. Sadly this story has ended... Now give me a sequel!
So this story is kinda weird towards the ends but starts out realllllly good it is smut since it says in the title (18+) what else can you expect? But not all is smut some is just him in class or some ****.
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This is the best of stories I've ever read. I say big ups to the author and other readers. I guess the author must work on their grammar, spelling of words and vocabulary. Good characters and creative story development are out-of-this-world hence worth praising.
It's certainly a unique story lol. I just wish the MC wasn't such an asshole. Hed rather stuff pens and tennis balls up an inanimate objects butt than have sex with actual women 😗😗😗