摘要
"These are my conditions. You have to agree upon them before we can get married."
"Accepted. Each one of them is accepted. Any more conditions, soon to be wife?"
"Yes, I want your help to destroy my jerk of an ex-boyfriend."
A sly smile appeared on the lips of the men sitting opposite her.
"With pleasure." How could he let his competitor stay unharmed? He would be having his own fun in destroying the man who had made him taste vinegar a lots of times.
"Something as?"
Before she could even shake her head, he stood up from his seat and held her hand. "Let's go."
"Where are we going?"
"Civil affairs bureau. Any time later and it will be closed."
Xin Mei looked at the man with wide eyes, and before she could comprehend, she was sitting in civil affairs bureau with a marriage license in her hand.
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Xin Mei woke up from coma after 3 weeks of long sleep. She faced a brutal reality like every other female lead; her boyfriend was cheating on her with her best friend. Feeling vengeful, she decided to have her revenge.
It's payback time.
"She snatched my boyfriend; I will snatch her career from her."
"He rejected me. No problem. I will find a more handsome man than him."
"His father made my father beg; now I will make him beg."
And who will help her? Su Yuchen!
Su Yuchen believed that a person can fall in love only once and he had already fallen in it. His belief was broken badly when he met Xin Mei. After tasting a lot of vinegar, he could not wait for another second to make her his wife. He could not lose his second inning in love.
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Oh my goodness I love your novel I hope there will be many more to come and I can't wait for the updates to come I'm really looking forward to it and I can't wait for the big face slaps to come and I hope the FL and ML to finally meet again and for their romance to start. I will support you and read all your novels. 😄❤😃❤
Story is developing really nice and not the usual strong antoganist but she is little funny...and FL too knows what she is doing and expecting to have nice twist the ML. Past few chapters are making my hopes up. Keep it up.
I don't understand how many people still give this so high ratings when everything's messed up. The grammar, narration, characters, etc.. There are suggestions about getting an editor but it was no use. The FL is dumb no matter what she finds out. You guys know stories with airhead female leads, right? Well I'm just gonna tell you this. Her stupidity is far more worse even when you mix all the heads of those FL's altogether
Was desperate to find some good read and I came across this. Tried reading a few chapters but dropped after ch. 20 or something. Reasons: 1) FL is such a dumbo - maybe she'll get smarter courtesy of her exp but I don't have the patience to wait for it. For 7 fucking years, not once did she doubt her friend and boyfriend having an affair! People tried fo dissuade her from continuing the relationship but no she's stubborn as ****. Her ignorance is too much that I want to slap some sense into her. 2) Who the hell stays after being beaten by your boyfriend? I mean there some who stays in those kind of relationship but hello? She's not alone. She have a loving and understanding family. I'm not sure about the others but based on my observations and some readings/documentaries I've read and heard, people only stays in an abusive relationship because they depend on them and most are either estranged from their families or what. Their partner is like their anchor but for the love of God, this FL have her whole family fucking supporting her. 3) FL is self-centered. No explanations needed. If you don't believe me, read at your own risk. Go waste your time.
The story is almost a replica of Hidden marks full marriage. Since that was my first novel on this platform, I an dearly attached to it. So I am obviously offended that some is trying to copy the plot with just twisting a bit.😡😡😡😡😡😠😠😠😠
I just started reading. And the stories and main characters is so bad that I decided to give up. The main female character lack self awareness and endure abuses from her ex and best friend without thinking of herself. I know that this is just the first chapter and the story might get better but I don’t want to waste my time. 
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This is my first time writing a bad review because I hate writing them but...... It has bad grammar, its is so freaking confusing, the plot is messed up, the FL is straight up f*cked up DUMB. she has no hope left and I gave up on her after the 5th chapter. The characters didn't even have time to introduce themselves and we just had a million info rush at us. I am already bad at remembering ANYTHING. Also the narration was too quick no matter how you look at it. The first 3 chapters are supposed to set the path for you to know what the story is about. But we just had the scene of her being cheated on and then 2 chapters after we get a flashback. Couldn't we have gotten that before? Also you should to switch some chapters up. I was struggling to understand what was happening so I just dropped it. (BTW this is just my personal opinion you totally don't even have to care!)
So my review might sound rude, but I must be honest, it's a virtue(hehe). This novel is a, how do I say it, a copycat of FMHM. I mean FMHM was, is and will always be my fav novel so reading sth that tries to copy it and that too in a poorer way is totally disheartening. There are so manyyyy grammatical errors, at first you try to ignore but it just gets too much. I hope the author find an editor and that too first. But all in all it's an average quality novel and I hope the author improves coz she had a lot of room for improvement.
It's a nice story, It's not flawless on grammars, but still .. I can manage to understand.. it not easy to write a story... but.. just keep it up. And FIGHTING!!!! I'M LOOKING FORWARD FOR EVERY CHAPTERS !💪💪
I like the way this story is moving. But sometimes it getss a bit dragged .still i love the writer. And her stories so good luck for the upcoming episodes.. I would like to request if you could upload moore chapters daily
While it is well written, by ch.11 I knew I couldn't read this. I don't have any positive feelings towards the MC. Her happiness is not important and I think she deserved to be tricked so badly. since this is only the first couple chapters, I won't mark as spoilers because it's just obvious that this part was going to happen. The brother, family and friend of the MC has repeatly told her that she has been lied to by the boyfriend and best friend. It's been 7 years and they weren't even hiding their relationship very well. they held hands in front of her. Everyone brushes it off as her being innocent, but come on. She wasn't sheltered on a mountain top. but fine, I could have accepted that and moved on until she confirmed the truth. They were cheating for 7 years. they are engaged. he was using her for her family's business connections and to link their business investments. She was using her to connect to her uncle for her acting career and as a corporate spy for her dad. Obviously, you would think the MC would tell her family because 1. they need to know not to continue helping these people succeed and 2. to try and figure out how to protect themselves and their businesses. but what does she do? We idea not to tell them anything! are you kidding me? These 2 horrid little gremlins are still making money off your family and have snaked their way in and you are not going to give the people you love a heads up that danger is literally in their house? nope. I have no idea why the good friend loves and supports the MC so much or why I as the reader should want to cheer for her. There has not been a single redeeming thing I have read that would make me support her. She beat up her brother for saying something bad about the cheating scum! she threatened to stop being friends because she said something bad about the scum friend. These are people you love and have in your life and you don't have any trust or faith in them or are even willing to hear them out? so, she blindly believed everything that the scum people said. She begged and hurt the people that loved her over and over to help the scum and after a pathetic sorry, she them doesn't let her family know to watch out for the scum couple. What exactly should I like about her that makes me want her to be the MC and have a happy and successful life? If the author had her see the truth after her dream and put the pieces together herself. having that revelation of her own idiocy and then warning her family about the tricks, lies and scams, I think I could support and continue the story. The whole dream thing was pretty much pointless. You literally could have just had her see or hear something. all it did was show just how much abuse she was willing to accept. It had no impact on her or the story. I just... It just made me frustrated. I would not read this, even with free chapters.
I have to drop this. Turns out I am not a fan of original novels based on the Chinese culture but written by non-Chinese people. I only read three chapters but I found them to be very tedious. It is also hard to sympathise or empathise with the FL as she is presented as stupid beyond what is acceptable. Also, the story needs an editor because the grammar errors are quite numerous. I guess I will stick to translated novels from now on.
I am being shameless and doing my self promotion. Everyone who loves translated Chinese novels please give my novel a try. I am new and will do grammatical mistake but I can ensure you that you will love the story. Please give this book a try. Your author who loves her readers.