/ Anime & Comics / Gravity Control, in MHA
摘要
Here I am, your French writer once again.
This time my fanfic won't be about a reincarnated guy but an OC nonetheless.
Hope you enjoy this AU mha fanfic.
Join the discord: https://discord.gg/gSNuRm9
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Kotei Juryoku isn't interested in a lot of things.
He talks very rarely, so the fact that he wears a mask doesn't disturb him much.
Why does he want to be a hero?
The reason is quite simple... Not that I will say it yet.
As you would have guessed, his quirk is quite a powerful one. He can... control the very gravity!
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DISCLAIMER
Art is not mine and only the OC’s in the fanfic are my creations.
Big thanks to my bro [Lasagna_God] who once again, modified the cover.
I hope you will enjoy the fanfic!
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Ton novel est fuckin great! Merci pour cette entertainment, much love from Canada my friend! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
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Everything is good so far would be a perfect five star if they updated more .................................................................
Rare de voir d'autre écrivain français sur Webnovel donc voici ma review 5 étoiles. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Without a doubt one of the best fanfics of MHA that I've encountered. I loved that Nejire is the waifu here and not the usual 1-A students. I can't wait to see more.
Easily one of if not the best MHA. The only lacking aspect is the update speed. The MC has a very interresting personality and the story is well paced.
I like it. More updates would be nice--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 this is sick.. please update more chapter..it like a combine power of pain and fujitora
LOVING IT!!! REALLY INTERESTING!!! ....................................................................................................................
Writing Quality: 4 - Very few mistakes that doesn't break the immersion. Pretty good in my opinion. Stability updates: 3 - Middle score here, the series is starting and I cannot form a decent opinion on it. Story Development: 3 - Nice story with decent background, but you will notice the story is being influenced by the comments in the chapter and trying to keep the readers happy is not how you write something. Either they like your work or the do not. A writer NEVER goes around pleasing readers that dislike certain situations on YOUR story. Character Design: 3 - You can feel the characters in the writing format, they are fleshed out and actually you can relate to them, the MC is nicely done and is not robotic. But, as this is heavily based on "Boku no Hero Academia" some aspects that allow us to relate to those characters are because we already read the manga or watched the anime, hence the middle score. I think this Author could have talent in an orignal novel should he choose to write one. World Background: 5 - BNHA world. Remember to read the available chapters to form you own opinion as mine may differ from others.
Five start to my French bro 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Our grandfather got sent an amazon package for literally no reason at all. We don't know how he got it, but it is your story as an amazon book called Peter Bouchard's Discover by Peter Bouchard. I don't know how this landed in our hands because we have never heard of this story before (cool beans btw), but I'm literally holding this story in my hands. So sorry someone is selling your fic if you are indeed not Peter Bouchard, also super stoked about having your book in physical copy because I don't know if anyone else does. We tried to join the discord but the link has expired since it must've been years since it was posted.
esto es basura,,,,,................................................................................................................................................
Honestly one of my top 10 fanfics of MHA. A shame no new update come out, but it was good. I liked how Nejire was the gf, never seen a fanfic with her before. Wish it went on a little longer, at least till the scene when the big 3 are introduced to the class.
this..i cant believe it,,,this just makes ur other stories look like ****,,,I dont know what but god damn man, its like someone else wrote it...might be cruel to say this , but focus on this more...this might be one of the best BNHA FF's..one chp and its dope [suggestion: look at the world for what it actually is, not the Hippocratic way, with izukus stupidness...also dont make him a bend over, overly friendly dude. Dont make MC an idiot . Any relationship show build and take **** slow, and if romance, show why the chick is worth it something, dont just like cause she looks good] Really though, this is nice