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I think this will be very good when you have time to write so I will add to my library and wait for next chapter ........................................................................................................................................................................................................
I really want more chapters. Author, please continue to write more. I beg you, please. I would very much like to read more. Author if you have a Patreon I will join it and donate money. I really enjoy this novel. Mind you, I am drunk rn but I do like this novel and would like a good 200-300 chapters and will pay for them. Mind you, I am currently broke but am starting work soon and will be making money soon. But please author write more chapters. It is amazing. And you are an amazing author.
dude I have been waiting for it for long..........what happened ................my temptations. .....🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
A really Amazing story full of unknown temptation ........just need super updates and more evilness.. ....😐😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
The writing is so good that after reading it anything else leaves me disgruntled. The only thing that I don't like is that there is currently only 25 chapters, thankfully they are pretty long so there is some meat, still not nearly enough. Hoping for another 500 chapters minimun or I will be sad.
to be honest, this novel wasn't what I was expecting but it turned out to be way better than I could ever imagine. Great piece of literature
The plot is interesting and well paced, characterisation is consistent and grounded, update schedule is good, chapter length is great, lemons are well written and don't distract from the story. What isn't there to like?
The author dropped the novel sadly... So, this is just for filling the 140characters to post this heehee: .................................
this book has surprisingly good story for a fap metarial. it's really good. it's more like a degenerate lifeste in harrypotter rather than degenerate lifestyle in a H world of harrypotter. yeah author did a good job at keeping the world like harrypotter instead of making it similar to any generic H entai world. so we can enjoy a fap harrypotter novel now instead another generic fap novel with a name harrypotter.
This fic is really good. In the beginning the plot was good enough to get you immersed and feel interested but as more chapters keep coming, the writing quality keeps improving I'm totally recommending this.
Becoming an OP Draco Malfoy never is a Bad fanfic. Atleast for me so far and this Story is extremly good so give it a Nice and Long read. He still has to Join Hogwarts and has fun with His Family Till then.
Simply amazing, the only problem is the small amount of chapters: WE NEED MORE!!!! ! !!! !!!! !!! !! !! !!!!!! ! !!! !!! !! !!! !!! !!! !! !!
(Una joya) si quisiera describir esta obra sería una palabra JOYA, cada capítulo estan increíbles joder me encanta que el MC no sea una basura como la mayoría de los fics tiene un buen fondo la verdad la escritura del autor es una de las mejores que e leído ( autor si lees esto te pediré que porfavor no pares y sigue escribiendo más de esta gran obra te estaremos esperando con gusto y sigue asi, gracias por darnos está gran obra la valoramos demasiado ❤️✨)
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A really well done piece. Nicely written. Actually readable unlike many other fics on webnovel.
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