/ Anime & Comics / Gojo Uchiha Twin Brother Of Itachi Uchiha
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One with hair as dark as night yet is one of the kindest people in this world. One with hair as pure as white yet is one of the most selfish people in this world. Itachi and Gojo Uchiha, are the twin prodigies of the Hidden Leaf Village. They were outstanding genius, prodigies amongst prodigies, but complete opposites
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As I understand it, the author is a fan of Itachi. But he couldn't write a fanfic about Itachi, because he is his idol and he can't touch him, but it is quite possible to create a likeness to him. Which is what he actually did. The fic is pretty mediocre, jumping from topic to topic. Doesn't really reveal anything.
author has Itachi's D so much down his throat he's almost choking on it.. like why tf would you make your own MC have much lower potential n whatnot compared to Itachi?? if you liked him so much just make Itachi MC instead of bringing a new character into this... also Gojo is the family name his name should've been Uchiha Satoru that even sounds better those first 10 chapters ruined everything and is the reason most people including myself are dropping this also a lazy mc without that much power is boring too
This Author just made Gojo's 'Limitless' full of limits that it is not even a job at this point and he just gives the readers some of the most BS reasons to just support his next level dumb*ss writing, if he want to glaze Itachi that much might as well write a fanfic about him as the MC but nope this Author just wants to use Gojo to get more readers My opinion of this fanfic : Not worth it
The story is good. That’s all it is tho. It has its negatives and positives like anything else but the quality of this doesn’t make you have that itch where you want to read more and more. His wishes are explained in ch. 10 for those people that might be confused why he isn’t totally Op. still though the author has his own theories of things and integrates them into the story which may rub some people the wrong way.. for example kust the way his infinity works or how he’s basically not letting ‘gojo‘ acutally utilize his godly chakra control. Some other things don’t make sense either like him and itachi learning seals from kushina to them in a matter of a few paragraphs being able to use flying thunder god. There should be a normal progression of skills, you can’t jump from explaining how kushina can make huge storage seals to them both just having flying thunder god. There are so many sealing jutsu that could be incorporated into their fighting style and since they’ve learnt it they should also use them no? This story would be pretty good for someone who has never watched naruto because even the most basic things are overexplained so the story often times feels lifeless, adding to that is that it seems the author is not a native English speaker so some things sometimes just come out wrong I feel like. Positive things are that the author has a plan in mind for the story and acutally gives explanations to things others would just overlook. I also like that itachi is being brought up as a rival for mc even though it does feel like the author has a hard on for itachi making him even more talented than he originally was… all in all pretty good but not comparable to some of the top tier stories on webnovel
This is thrash gojo suppose to be op but attack infuse with Chakra can still hit him and Chakra is the main power system in Naruto so was he suppose to be op like gojo
This is some next level bullshit written fanfic with Walmart version gojo and his limitless technique filled with limits. The mc is very unlikeable character from get go with his emo attitude and trying to make joke at every second like in the god damn super hero marvel movies. The writing quality is straight up horrible but that's is to be expected from amateur making his wish fulfillment harem fanfic. Don't even start me with the story development it's makes me puke.
el principal problema que se llama Satoru no Gojo , Gojo es el apellido no el nombre xd
Well, writing isn't bad, but this story is very frustrating. The interaction isn't really noteworthy. Characters feel lifeless. The author is a huge fan of itachi and this fact will be reminded in every chapter. He'll continue to say that itachi is talented more than mc. Also,it's not clear exactly what wishes that mc made, but mc has apparently the psuedo six eye. Now, what does he mean by pseudo six eye isn't clear .He can apparently see things at an atomic level, but it's still a pseudo.He somehow has infinity, but with chakra, it's easily passable, I'm not exactly sure how infinity is passable with just chakra . Overall, if the author's a fan of itachi, I'd suggest writing an itachi fanfic. Anyway, good luck to author's future endeavours.
everyone take notes if life cast a dry spell and find girls avoiding you read this and learn from the master to learn how to rizz up girls. honestly i’m glad these classes free lol. ok let’s be honest this is a awesome, funny, action pact fic it’s a great read and hope it don’t get dropped . take notes and learn from sensei Gojo
Is there room for improvement? Yes, but I'm loving the story so far. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This a work it’s a very fire bro………………………….………………………….………………………….…………………………. Sorry for the dots, it was necessary to score 140 characters with something
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Well, writing isn't quite bad, but this story is very uplifting. The interaction is really noteworthy. Characters feel like full of life. The author is a huge fan of itachi and this fact will be reminded in every chapter without it being boring. He'll continue to say that itachi is talented more than mc, while being best bros. Also, it's not clear exactly what wishes that mc made, but mc has apparently has six eyes full developed. Now, what does he mean by developed six eye is quite clear .He can apparently see things at an atomic level, but it's a extremely high level .He somehow has infinity, but with chakra, it's easily passable, I'm not exactly sure how infinity is passable with just chakra, but author explains it really well, although I cannot comprehend it . Overall, if the author's a fan of itachi, I'd suggest writing an itachi fanfic again with MC cuz it's just that dayum goooood. Anyway, good luck to author's future endeavours.
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This is garbage. 1st here Hirazun is the strongest after Madara and Hashirama. 2nd mc has 6eyes of Gojo but it works only on non-chakra based . 3rd Mc is weak but he is God in medical. 4th Environment around mc is cringe like how characters bahave around him
This work is garbage with very, very poorly written characters (it feels like Satoru has schizophrenia... or he's a tsundere...). The idea of the work is interesting, but the implementation is terrible (I couldn’t even read two chapters)