摘要
[Hi, I am Poppy Hardy, Your system general manager.
You have finally gain access to the entire fund on the system.
Congratulations.
$100,000,000,000,000 have been unlocked.
You can now donate as you want.
You can now investment as you want.
You can spend as you want.
Good luck host.
Become the most beloved man on earth]
Once bullied, once humiliated, once he begged like a dog, but now everybody wants lick his feet.
Ethan Winston, The remarkable Giver! Godly Investor!
To hell with you all. I would provide and protect those in my heart!
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interesting approach and I like the pace that it is going, hope there will be no cultivation shit later on or people doing magic and shit, keep it urban
the mc is such a wimp it’s crazy and some of the actions he do don’t even make sense like why would you date a random girl that you don’t know for no reason?? 💀🙏
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
The story needs a rewrite, the idea is good but it's very badly written , it's gringe, the guy begs people so he can help them , the way the nurse spoke to him,, his way of talking about closing the hospital is unrealistic , it doesn't make you want to help, it looks like a waste, he does not need to be in the hospital to donate, he could have done it anonymously , it seems like he wants to show everyone that he wants to help , it looks bad, he could go online to look for associations, orphanages, etc. to help online ,no need to show yourself.