/ Fantasy / God Of Technology
摘要
Niles always had it rough always being bullied,ignored and oppressed
His parents and twin younger siblings despise him,he gets humiliated by his childhood crush and gets beaten up by her boyfriend whose his bully and is tired of it hoping something will change.
What happens when his entire class gets summoned to a new world as new found Gods but he still gets treated as a bug by these Gods who summoned them and shunned and mocked because I'm weak.
While they get help from the older gods on their starting villages I'm stuck in a place where they throw the worthless in society.
Well that's what they think
-Infertile land i will make it flourish
-Weak village i will turn it into an empire
- No one has been blessed with magic talent by the God of magic who needs it while i can turn my people into espers and give them a better constitution than all
- Well lets show them to think my divinity of technology is trash well lets see .
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I can't wait for more! Please. I need to see this revenge happen! Other than that, this is amazingly written. Just reading about the other students and gods made me hate them. I will be overjoyed when those "nice people" die agonizing deaths 😀.
I really like the concept, characters, and world design so far. Very interesting, but the updates are severely lacking. I hope the author comes back to the this.
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I have read and now I giveth because my goal is to aim for half a million views hope you guys help me get there as I'll post every Sunday I can.
Aint no way. I freakin like this book a long time ago like maybe one year or 2 ago and I just found it again and it's updating chapters this. Is. The? Best thing that has ever happened. I'm to staying with this book to the end.
Double upload tomorrow so wait and see as its becoming closer to development .
Guyssssssssssssssss I'm back and better and ever had to do a lot of stuff and got a new device to start writing again so I am motivativated to keep on writing for you guys
Author san, please don’t drop this, this story it’s one of the best for me at least so far.
This a wonderful story to read and enjoy. Well thought out ideas. A few spelling issues in a few chapters, but other than that great story.
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Guys I will try to write one tomorrow its because I have school work until late so until then
fantastic series, really hope it continues, only issue is the mc species. great story though. i am relatively new to app so don’t know if post can be taken down if required, if author requests this please explain how to do so, thank you. (the below comment is made upon reading the story a while ago while delibrately ignoring the character design to envision my own after reading how the author described it, so comments made on this are highly likely to be incorrect as i can’t accurately recall the authors description of the character at the moment of writing this, i am extremely unlikely to look at responses so please, if your offended don’t bother you’ll just be wasting your time as i both won’t see it and won’t be looking to see it. dear author i apologise in advance wether i am incorrect in the below comments or wether i am correct as i really enjoy your story but have something to request about it changing / updating it ) character has good backstory and development but… why? 3 tails of different kinds!!! and the rest!!! I understand the efforts involved to make a UNIQUE , NON-COPYRIGHTED, species, but please change it as ( in my opinion only and not acounting for anyone else it’s a bit of a horror themed mish mash of randomly selected monsters to create something quickly) it can be improved though if i do say so arrogantly myself ( in my opinion only ) ( may be incorrect ) i understand you probably have more experience than i in character species creation but just some suggestions? 1) symmetry - line of symmetry down the middle unless scar feature emphasised otherwise it mya ( in my oppinion only ) give appearnace of mutant. mutant e.g. super powerful weapon held on 1 side of the body and other side of body is weak at least in contrast to it. 2) don’t overly mutate humans to make characters e.g. werwolf and other mixed together. e.g. don’t make 1st bicep on a characters arm belong to a crabs and rest of arm a velociraptor arm. or in this case don’t make 1st half ears a “”(can’t remeber species) and 2nd half ears a rabbits. no offense but for those unfortunate enough to have [ ( books / comics ) ruined over a certain theme brought up by characters in ( book / comic ) usually denoted by a form of ( not the correct term - trying to avoid the pollitical speak ) “weakness” e.g. shwoing weakness around many or one charcater(s) in a certain theme. shown in certain characters shown via their behaviours, actions, or species - usually symbolised by a “weak prey” species - LIKE RABBITS. - here is where i have another big issue. i understand this does not exist in your book and as i have not mentioned it just blatantly hinted at it, i hope there are no consequences for either of us in this matter but i’d rather you keep these themes out of your book as there’s no necessity for them to be there. 3) when creating a character from earth - usually safest to stick with a human. I understand you need to make a new race, couldn’t get copyrighted and needed something memorable but, if you distort what your readers are anticipating a charcter to look like then it leads to a disliking of the characters species ( in my case only, don’t know of others ) e.g. technology god, although cliche not a bad idea to just go cyborg, and then use augmentations to remove unwanted character features. just a thought that concludes suggestions. Although i have no control over how this story progresses or how you could choose to use the character , wether augment it , reset it to human form or do nothing is only in your hands. No matter what you do with the character, so long as you don’t go too far, i will continue to read this series and I am grateful for the series posted so far ( thank you ) I realise i am in this instance one of hundreds if not thousands, in the unlikely case you see this and are bored enough to read to the end, i hope you take my views on board when progressing with the story. Thank you for all your work, have a good day :) please change the mc features a bit e.g. ditch rabbit features and 3 tails, 1 is enough. this is how i percieve your description of character proably wrong though ( 3 tails chosen at random and bot according to book description, description not valid representation. new note to author please publish image of chracter to comment section as cyborg on book front page is misleading ( in my opinion only and not to be taken seriously ) although please show us what mc looks like as my bad attempt at it is below emjoi’s at top = ear parts emoji’s at bottom = tails 🐰 🐰 🐺 _ 🐺 / - - \ \ /_ / \ <__> / \____/ _______ | | ______ | | | | | | | | | | \\\\ /| |\ //// |_________| 🐈 | __ | 🐓 | | | |🐓🐓 🦫| | | | _|____| |___|_ /_____ | |_____\
This is incredibly nice to read,I hope you have faster updates though, I almost forgot about it until I saw a new chapter while looking for something to read.
this is a great story and I’d love to see another chapter, i will post 1 vote ( gem ) a day until new chapter. Thank you for such a great story and continuing it would be great, thank you. 🦾🤖👍
sup guys I'm continuing and going to do the 7th chapter i was in a strut so it will be better now