/ Urban / God of music
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this is a story about a frank west who transmigrated into a new body in the far future where technology had advanced very far and the humans had formed a large empire covering the whole galaxy. but the entertainment industry is lacking and some bands and singers that suppose to be in history for their songs are not there and as a result, frank is given a system that will make him and his band the greatest singer in music history.
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I won't lie it's a little short but give it a try MADE YOU LOOK ..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,,.,..,,..,.,.,.,.,.,
you have potential ..............................................................................................................................................
Se ve bien. La historia tiene potencial. No puedo esperar para leer más. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
it would be really cool I you us the song strawberry cake by xdinary heroes the have the same theme your going and the chapter it can be about he bad ex girlfriend who found out he was becoming famous and then he released that song
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