/ Anime & Comics / God Of Fighting.{A Martial Arts Fanfic.} {Hiatus}
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This is a martial arts ff that spans multiple worlds. It will begin in Baki, then go to Kengan Ashura. Danmachi/Campione is in the works too so expect that at some point. The MC is gonna be similar to yujiro so take that as you will.
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I hope you don’t back out since it’s literally a good start atm. And also your novel about Naruto is literally one of the best Naruto fan-fictions I’ve ever read tbh. Btw Baki and other martial arts anime fanfic are rare these days and I hope you don’t give up just because it’s long or weird or ****. No dawg, you do your thing and if you like then keep going and don’t stop and ignore the criticism.
The first baki fanfic that I’ve seen and I really like this fanfic because we don’t get a nice mc
im not gonna tell you how to do your job but i like this so i hope you write a lot more chapters than your other one.
Writing Quality: 5 - Nice Stability of Updates: 3 - welp... Idk what happened to this story but hasn't been updated for a long time... Story Development: 4 - Reincarnation as tradition 😂 BUT this one is peculiar, a sinful guy dies and meets devil and he literally makes a pact with him so he can have a second life, its a good approach to the story, what threw me off was the tail thing... but thats ok for now, there is not much story yet so i await for ur return. Character Design: 3- no comments here... World Background : 3 -no comments here... total score: 3.6 All in all, I do appreciated the approaches u have when doing ur thing, I would love to see u doing a dbz fanfic or a more strategic one like code geass, attack on titan, or even fairy tail ! but please don't drop this novel, or at least open a patreon or a group on discord were we can discuss and share ideas to improve the fanfics ! thanks for showing ur work !
Real Author here. The main account for this novel has been hacked so if any of you see activity from any of my novels, just know its not me.
I really like this ff. Its so interesting and all in good ways. Plus it's really and I mean really hard to find novel on baki and the ones they do have which are very few usually are never updated again.PLEEEAAASSSSEEEEE DON'T DROPPP CAUSE ITS AN AMAZING NOVEL SO CONTINUE
I really liked your story about naruto so I began reading this story and it's great so I'll try to support you how I can
Damn Its pretty Good it has good development and its pretty smooth of how the story flowed btw will you make karura a love interest or harem? will you save emi?(fukada jk) \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥
Amazing story. expexpexpexpexpexp. Really like your mc. expexpexpexpexp. I eagerly await for more. expexpexp. Although he is a massive 7-8 year Old.
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I really like your other story fiction on naruto !! I really like the way you write stories because they are brutal !! it feels fresh to Me, and I just saw this another masterpiece !! Hope you can keep up with the updates on both book tho. GOODLUCK.