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this story will soon be going on a re-rewrite with an entirely new premise. The new premise will still be related to having anime based powers in a cultivation world. but this time MC has to work for it rather than just breezing his way through all of it. there will be no system or cheat or anything of sorts. The only thing he will be getting is his high talent in cultivation and past life memories.
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寫檢討the novel is too good,but the real thing that trigger is me is that why isnt the host using akashic records to use Predator ,the ability that lets him absorb other monsterss,or demon beasts in TDG to get skill i hope author clears this up,thanks,i did give a 5star so please answer this
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Now development, the character just gets stronger via time skips. The wish’s were so op that the mc will never struggle. That is also the mc personality, he won’t ever put himself In a position where te possibility of losing exist. The mc is meh, the story development is bad, grammar is bad but understandable, the plot development is nonexistent. 6/10
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Rating as of Ch.21 - Above average with less to no mistake grammatical errors. Story progression is unique as author-san doesn't follow the usual plot of TODAG. MC has unique gifts and views pertaining to the world itself. Update stability and shortness of chapter is abysmally slow and low which is the only downside of this FF. Still, kudos author-san for this FF.
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作者 Super_Supa
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